If I Die Tonight...

Scribbles.

Reviews

[Carmine Branco]

When you feel empty and guilty of what you are or have become, life becomes a trial and nothing can bring you to feel it change, if not death and oblivion. Very powerful verses.

[Coyote Poetry]

Like a Allan Poe poem. Only darkness to be found. Sometime I do feel this way my dear friend. To fall into darkness. The light of hope be gone. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Yumna this poem hurts the heart to read. If this is how you are truly feeling, I’d like to give you the warmest of hugs. That is so little when the pain is so great.

Why some may ask. If it is a follow on from recent posts, then I fully understand. Take care dear poet.

Chris

[Pete]

wow. ouch. a painful write. i think we all feel that way sometimes. can't help but wonder what is behind this. such thoughts surely must be honest and real ... :)

[Wondering Mind]

My goodness!... Why?
Unless your preferences are such.
It's almost like a twisted Rumi , in a sense