SuperWoman

SuperWoman

A Poem by yusuf


Powerful eyes disguising pain , 
Tears as if tamed ;

To be shunned , 
with smile not to blend.

Tall she stand, 
with plastic smile grand.

Shattered and shaken ,
agonys taken.

Her sufferings never revealed,
painful secrets in her lips concealed.

Ordeals taken , 
lonely and forsaken,.

Despite dauntness, 
Herself she firmly harness. 

Strong she be , 
stronger than me.

Seraphic human,
she is superwoman.

© 2012 yusuf


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'Agonys', should actually be spelled 'agonies'. :) My only critique for this piece!
Thank you for sharing another wonderful poem.

~Erinne

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

Thank You So much! You always make me improve.
beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

Thank You , Wendy.
great job!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

Thank You So Much!
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Our world is filled with super women never receiving their due recognition . . . . until now. A very complete homage work that I enjoyed very much.

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

I am glad that you enjoyed sir! Thank You so much!
A nice poem Yusuf. Thank you for penning.

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

thank you so much.
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

^^~^^ .You are welcome.
brilliant

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

Gracias!
wow... just love it to bits!!" superwoman, this describes the house wives in the poor countries, beaten every single day but they still stand their ground to take care of their children

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

thank you so much.
luviva

8 Years Ago

welcme
woman....
destined suffer?

shattered an shaken, agony taken.... is that a woman is suppose to be...?
I donno..

Every woman is a superwoman... else how can she exist in this cruel society.?

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

Sir I wrote this piece for a specific woman , i know! i ain`t talking about the whole women league! .. read more
Pradeep Nair

8 Years Ago

It describes every woman, I came across..... Great Job
yusuf

8 Years Ago

thank you sir. :)
good poem for the times, theres super people everywhere you turn

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

Thank You. :)
A woman is about tolerance, patience and quite dignity and strength.
Superb picturisation coming from your words there. So effective, my own mind pictured my mother, an epitome of all the above qualities.
My compliments on the touching piece! Regards, ThinkingDN

Posted 8 Years Ago


yusuf

8 Years Ago

Thank You So Much. You made my day bu understanding the meaning between my words. I am obliged. :)
DIVYA

8 Years Ago

You are welcome! :)

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Added on November 20, 2012
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