A Claim Staked

Pass up the chance on a mistake

Fist Fight 

at dawn.

Pistols 

drawn

in the

sand

carry on.

I'm a throwback 

You can only 

ride me bareback

Now for god's sake

let me have my panic

attack

then we can begin

from where we are at?

Reviews

[costa siwale]

Your writing is clinical, well done

[Zach Knox]

thanks again

[Great Aunt Astri]

May he have his panic attack in peace! This little poem made me giggle. Trouble is , the whole world ought to be panicing a bit the way things are going. Nothing wrong with a little bit of panic!

[Zach Knox]

sometimes everyone needs a panic attack

[Sami Khalil]

You have that unique style and voice that is very interesting and that is highly commendable...:)..........

[Pryde Foltz]

Clever write, Zach. These kinds of duels can be disastrous when the stakes are high as you so eloquently allude.

[Zach Knox]

i confused myself with this one the images in my head when i wrote this one was like cowboy themed or something but I am glad you enjoyed it

[Pryde Foltz]

Lol. Yes, I did.