Lovely senryu! It irks me when people call pieces such as these a haiku. Haikus relate strictly to nature; a senryu, human nature and events. This is a great SENRYU. Anyway, it seems pieces about current events are few and far inbetween. Thank you for sharing.
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4 of 4 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Hi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senr.. read moreHi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senryu.
I have to learn more.
I need your support.
Happy Olympics!!!
11 Years Ago
Haikus do not relate strictly to nature. And human nature is still nature.
11 Years Ago
Thanks for the lovely review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
11 Years Ago
I took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly rel.. read moreI took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly related to nature. Senryu is human natures and events. 5-7-5 is everything in between.
Yes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it.. read moreYes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it is.
Hi Renee,Happy Olympics!!!
This is the tribute from writerscafe.
Glad that you have join.. read moreHi Renee,Happy Olympics!!!
This is the tribute from writerscafe.
Glad that you have joined the conversation during the colorful opening ceremony.
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I can not think of a better way to share this event.. than with friends from around the world... sha.. read moreI can not think of a better way to share this event.. than with friends from around the world... shall we take bets? lol
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That would be very noble idea.
Thanks also for the appreciation about sharing.
Congratul.. read moreThat would be very noble idea.
Thanks also for the appreciation about sharing.
Congratulate friends for responding warmly.
Lovely piece! Proud of the Olympics being hosted in my home country! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Congratulations, Rebbie for being the lucky person.
We can wish you Happy Olympics!!!
Th.. read moreCongratulations, Rebbie for being the lucky person.
We can wish you Happy Olympics!!!
Thanks also for the lovely review.
Was just watching the opening haha, looking forward to more!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Thanks for watching the great event.
You are also the part of a great history.
Adore you.. read moreThanks for watching the great event.
You are also the part of a great history.
Adore your review.
Happy Olympics!!!
Lovely senryu! It irks me when people call pieces such as these a haiku. Haikus relate strictly to nature; a senryu, human nature and events. This is a great SENRYU. Anyway, it seems pieces about current events are few and far inbetween. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
4 of 4 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Hi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senr.. read moreHi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senryu.
I have to learn more.
I need your support.
Happy Olympics!!!
11 Years Ago
Haikus do not relate strictly to nature. And human nature is still nature.
11 Years Ago
Thanks for the lovely review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
11 Years Ago
I took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly rel.. read moreI took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly related to nature. Senryu is human natures and events. 5-7-5 is everything in between.
Yes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it.. read moreYes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it is.
Thanks for the fabulous review.
I am grateful for your compliments.
Let's see the teleca.. read moreThanks for the fabulous review.
I am grateful for your compliments.
Let's see the telecast and enjoy.
Hi Emily,I am very excited now.The inaugural ceremony is going on.You have reviewed so nicely now.read moreHi Emily,I am very excited now.The inaugural ceremony is going on.You have reviewed so nicely now.
Hope your teams succeed.
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As I wish the same for yours! Funny how a competition this grand, actually brings others together.
11 Years Ago
Thanks.
Really,it brings us together.
Don't miss the telecast.
Thank for the amazing review.
You have captured the moment of the inaugural ceremony of London.. read moreThank for the amazing review.
You have captured the moment of the inaugural ceremony of London Olympics 2012.
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You're quite welcome.
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Very nice to celebrate together.
A historical moment for us all.
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Yes, I agree. It's nice how the Olympics can bring the whole world together.
11 Years Ago
Thank you for the great comment.
Olympics can bring the whole world together.
It binds.. read moreThank you for the great comment.
Olympics can bring the whole world together.
It binds people with love and friendship.
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You're welcome. You're right, the Olympics are definitely worth writing about.
11 Years Ago
That's right.
Such moments are rare.
Happy Olympics!!!