Lovely senryu! It irks me when people call pieces such as these a haiku. Haikus relate strictly to nature; a senryu, human nature and events. This is a great SENRYU. Anyway, it seems pieces about current events are few and far inbetween. Thank you for sharing.
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11 Years Ago
Hi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senr.. read moreHi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senryu.
I have to learn more.
I need your support.
Happy Olympics!!!
11 Years Ago
Haikus do not relate strictly to nature. And human nature is still nature.
11 Years Ago
Thanks for the lovely review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
11 Years Ago
I took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly rel.. read moreI took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly related to nature. Senryu is human natures and events. 5-7-5 is everything in between.
Yes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it.. read moreYes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it is.
The whole world is involved... the atheletic cream of all nations that partake in sports is present to compete. An entire generation of the best of everyone's best.
Well spoken sir.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Dear Chris,
I feel very honored to receive your admiring review on the day of the beginning of.. read moreDear Chris,
I feel very honored to receive your admiring review on the day of the beginning of the great event of games,London Olympics 2012.
We may be old,the appeal of London Olympics 2012 will not be old.
The emergence of young power from the experience of the old
will continue to advance human civilization.
Let's hail London Olympics 2012 !!!
Best regards,
Zainul
I love the Olympics! I'm hoping to see it happen in person in a couple years! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for your great review.
You are the first in this site to express your love for the .. read moreThank you for your great review.
You are the first in this site to express your love for the Olympics.
I adore your interest,love and passion for the Olympics.
Enjoy London Olympics 2012 and become a part of history!