Comfort Dog

Comfort Dog

A Poem by zainul
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Shocked by the tragic massacre in Sandy Hook Elementary School

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Comfort dogs have hearts

Children play safely with them

Savage killed angels

© 2012 zainul


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A powerful statement, the shortness of the piece works perfectly; what can one say about something like that, I admire your bravery and tact to do so and with such success. Lets just hope something gets done to stop it ever happening again...But unfortunately I don't hold out much hope..Well done, a moving piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

You have adequate reason for not holding out much hope.
But,as a poet we like to dream of a pe.. read more



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Children playing safely... if only that could be guaranteed - everywhere. A sad write, beautiful in its brevity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rita for the admiring review.
I hope they will be able to play safely someday.
Effective Senryu Zainul...Right (write) on

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely inspiration,Gray Witch.
Short, yet powerful.
Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. This is very touching!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A powerful statement, the shortness of the piece works perfectly; what can one say about something like that, I admire your bravery and tact to do so and with such success. Lets just hope something gets done to stop it ever happening again...But unfortunately I don't hold out much hope..Well done, a moving piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

You have adequate reason for not holding out much hope.
But,as a poet we like to dream of a pe.. read more
WOW! absolutely touching. very visual...I can just see the children and dogs at peaceful play, and then destruction.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. Succinct and well-said. It tugs at the heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the inspiring review.
It means a world to me.
wow so well said!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the admiring review.
this touches the soul.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Neva for the great support and admiring review.
So very touching and a painful reminder. Kudos, lest we never forget.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda for stopping by and gracing the conversation with your compassionate review.

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Added on December 18, 2012
Last Updated on December 18, 2012
Tags: Comfort Dog, comfort, dog, hearts, children, play, safely, savage, angels, shocked, tragic, massacre, Sandy Hook Elementary School

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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