Smile

Smile

A Poem by zainul
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Smile embraced the life of a little boy who was given a warm cloth in biting cold

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The little boy shivered in biting cold
Still he was serving food for young and old
The boy rushed from table to table
His speed matched only with fable

Suddenly a plate fell on the ground
All became alert by the breaking sound
The hotelier rushed to the boy and slapped on the face
He became furious and lost all grace

The guests of the hotel were busy with eating
They looked listless about his beating
A girl stood and asked the owner to  stop
He spared him and returned to his place of the shop

The poor boy started his work again in fear
The savior girl watched  him from near
The boy looked at her with grateful eyes
She saw that he wore a thin cloth to her surprise

She left the hotel and went to her class
Then she went to the market with her purse
She bought a sweater and returned soon
She beckoned the boy and offered the boon

The face of the boy became bright with smile
He bounced like a bird for a while
The girl felt very happy at the divine sight
She thought at least once she honored human right

© 2013 zainul


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I have been digging around tonight. Here, I came upon this. The title of course caught my attention.

I always enjoy your stories (even within poem such as this). You have a delightful way of telling them. Be they stories of hardship, life, whimsy or triumph.
This perfectly illustrates that it just takes one person to stop and care to make a difference in someone's life. No, he will not wear the sweater or the smile forever.. But that does not matter. For a time his heart was lighter.

Thank you for sharing this. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Rogue,you have magic and honey in your lovely words :)
You have been blessed with a great hear.. read more
Rogue

8 Years Ago

Now, I don't know about all that.. Rogue (just slipped right into that third person speak) can be an.. read more
zainul

8 Years Ago

I always see the good aspect of anything.
My lovely friend knows well how to sing.
Than.. read more


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I have been digging around tonight. Here, I came upon this. The title of course caught my attention.

I always enjoy your stories (even within poem such as this). You have a delightful way of telling them. Be they stories of hardship, life, whimsy or triumph.
This perfectly illustrates that it just takes one person to stop and care to make a difference in someone's life. No, he will not wear the sweater or the smile forever.. But that does not matter. For a time his heart was lighter.

Thank you for sharing this. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Rogue,you have magic and honey in your lovely words :)
You have been blessed with a great hear.. read more
Rogue

8 Years Ago

Now, I don't know about all that.. Rogue (just slipped right into that third person speak) can be an.. read more
zainul

8 Years Ago

I always see the good aspect of anything.
My lovely friend knows well how to sing.
Than.. read more
I love it. A great message to this world and to these ungrateful people who care only about money, and have totally forgotten about the humanity, love, and support for eachother.
Everyone should read this, because there's no one who'd stay cold at this touching poem. It brings the brightest spots in us, no matter how small they are. Everyone has that sensitive side, but we all need something like this to wake it up..
Wonderful, and touching. I really like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you Velida for stopping by to grace the piece with your precious heartfelt feelings.I feel re.. read more
This song is absolutly amazing. It really warms my heart.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you Tiasshy for your admiring review.

I am glad to know that it really warmed yo.. read more
Tiasshy

8 Years Ago

I hope so as well. I think people nowdays just don't see the truth anymore. That our wolrd isn't as .. read more
zainul

8 Years Ago

I appreciate your lovely words.
I hope you can become a perfect person.
Kindness from one person to another, I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.
Glad to know that you loved it.
Ah... Generosity. It can do such great things, yes? Such a wonderful, yet simple way you have explained it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you Krithika for the very inspiring review.
It means a lot to me.
This piece is lovely
I like the story in the poem and how it rhymes smoothly
Its always hard to write a happy poem but it seems to be a second nature to you
Well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

I feel very honored by your admiring review and generous compliments.
This means lot for me.read more
This was very touching write Zainul and with positive message. There is nothing like understanding people's faults or mistakes and then feel the compassion to help them instead of just judging them. Compassion comes from our love to God and his creation and when we give gifts of the heart we are honoring Him too...
Well penned dear friend...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

I do like positive writes with deep meanings...You are welcome...:)
zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for the precious contribution..:)
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
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sue
That was beautiful and so uplifting. Thank you for restoring faith in humanity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

I feel very blessed by your generous review and kind compliments.
Thank you for stopping by.
This is a beautiful poem bringing into focus of one human being helping another, something we all need to be aware of, especially in this world of ours today.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you Susie for stopping by and grace the work with your precious review.
Your support tow.. read more
ahhh.. its great to know i can always come here and read something positive, and this time overcoming something brutal and negative..

your giant heart is always present with your words my good friend..

and they let one leave with a gleam of hope and promise in their eyes..

very nice piece Zainul as always

:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

:))
Antonio Valentino

8 Years Ago

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))) sorry i won haha
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Added on December 31, 2012
Last Updated on January 1, 2013
Tags: boy, shivered, biting cold, food, serving, young, old, table, fable, plate, ground, sound, hotelier, slapped, face, grace, guests, hotel, listless, girl, stop, shop, work, fear, smile, sweater, human right, divine, sight

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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