Confusion

Confusion causes impasse

Confusion haunts me

Throws me to states of impasse

Seek escape in vain

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, the impasse...have felt that state...and can't remember the capital...


if our mind could think in shorter terms, like "three lines"

that would be a good thing...

we may be less confused.

i really like this piece...so much said in such few words--love senyru.

you do it well.

jacob

[zainul]

This is a very lovely review,Jacob.
It has enlightened me and inspired me immensely.
I always said that your love and trust enabled me to write pieces.
I am very grateful for your amazing compliments.

[Prritiy]

confusion when holds you then till you get some way out, really engulfs....

a treasure of wisdom in a few lines, liked it :)

best wishes

[zainul]

Thanks for the amazing review,Prritiy.
You have nicely pointed out the situation surrounding confusion.
Appreciate your lovely contribution :)

[Prritiy]

most welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Margret Sent]

It takes special skill to say so much in very few words. Kudos to this piece.

[zainul]

Thank you Margret for your kind words of compliments and Kudos.
I feel very honored by your inspiring gesture.

[marie]

Indeed we al are in some sort of confusion at all times and can never escape them wonderfully penned words to a common problem in society

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for stopping by to grace this piece with your thoughtful and admiring review.
This means a world to me.

[marie]

It's no problem:) I really enjoyed it:) truly a masterpiece:)

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure:)
Thank you again.

[marie]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Lauren]

I love this. Although short, I feel I can really relate to each word. Confusion can be the most uncomfortable feeling to deal with, and I often find myself feeling guilty for wanting to escape it entirely. Great job! :)

[zainul]

Thank you Lauren for the thoughtful review based on your personal experience.
I feel very inspired by your eloquent expression regarding confusion.

[ms. barrie]

Wonderful write, zainul. It amazes me how you're able to capture with so few lines the essence of your topic at hand! My favorite being the last line..very powerful yet eloquent, validating this entire piece. Pen on, My Dear Poet, Friend! :)

[zainul]

Thank you Barrie for the admiring words.
I am very honored to read your thoughtful review.
read moreThank you Barrie for the admiring words.
I am very honored to read your thoughtful review.
It means a world to me.

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, zainul...take care and Namaste!

[zainul]

Take care,dear friend
Cheers!

[ms. barrie]

You too, zainul...Cheers!!

[zainul]

:)

[ms. barrie]

:)

[Frieda P]

Wow, says so much in so few words...you did confusion justice, nice one.

[zainul]

I am sure you have done justice to the phenomenon of confusion that affects our lives in so many ways.Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, it's not easy to have such an affecting piece in so few words...

[zainul]

My pleasure too.
I am connected with talented poets like you here.
The inspiration comes from the priceless treasure.
I am always grateful to you,dear Frieda :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Very well written. Captures confusion and what it does to the mind. Nice.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the lovely review.
This means a lot to me.

[Priscilla Sayers]

You mean much to me dear. I may not always be able to reach out to everyone I cherish but you must know that you are cherished my friend... Always:)

[zainul]

This is really a great honor to me,Priscilla.
Only a generous heart like your can do such favors.
Thank you, dear heart :)
Thank you,dear friend :)

[Sarah Marie]

You described confusion perfectly...I think everyone has felt this journey. Really enjoyed this!

[zainul]

Thank you Sarah for stopping by to grace this piece.
I appreciate your lovely comment to express how confusion affects our lives.

[minisla]

Said so much in three lines ... wish I could do that with my attempts

[zainul]

Thank you minisla for the admiring review.
Certainly,you can do it easily.
Please write and post in WC .
Adore your interest in such type.

[durrya]

beautiful short poem! saying it all.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the admiring review.
It means a lot to me.

[durrya]

you are welcome!

[zainul]

:)