Guilt

Guilt

A Poem by zainul
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Friends have right to expect warm calls from their friends

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Sense of guilt haunts me

Have not said hello for long

Friends expect warm calls

© 2013 zainul


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The shortnesss of this poem is already on its own epitome. This is one thing to be proud of, Sir Zainul. Great job on using simplicity as strength and creating it as a piece that everyone would never tire to read. (:

I'm sorry for not always stopping by, I just stopped by now since I missed reading your works (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

(: thanks I'm glad to be of help (:
zainul

7 Years Ago

(:
Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

;D



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Simplicity speaks loudly when delivered with power!:) Nice!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Thank you Rain for the admiring review.
This means a lot to me :)
short sweet and to the point... I love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for the admiring review.
This means a lot to me.
This short poem says so much! We get busy with our lives and the next thing you know, years have passed. We need to connect with our friends before its too late. Otherwise the guilt will just build and build. This poem really got me to thinking. Thank you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

I adore your amazing review.
Yes,we need to connect with our friends before its too late.
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Written in the Haiku spirit, exalting goodness; well written, Haiku or not.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear poet for the amazing review and generous compliments.
myrt2013

7 Years Ago

My pleasure!
zainul

7 Years Ago

:)
You summed it all up, three lines that said a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Thank you Shelina for the admiring review and compliments.
That's a lovely set of words.. "Nice warm calls". It rolls right off the tongue and the sound makes one feel all warm and fuzzy. :)

I think your friends know you haven't forgotten them and your sincerity is true.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Hi Rogue,
Congratulations for introducing a wonderful phrase to wish friends.
Yes,"Nice .. read more
The simplicity of this is extremely effective, as is the message behind it. A very good poem, nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Thank you Faith for the wonderful words of review and compliments.
This means a world to me.
It is nice to hear a voice from friends as everything these days are Email...nicely done.
SyberRose

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

Thank you Syberose for your admiring review.
To me responding to reviews of lovely writers lik.. read more
We're all too busy engrossed in reading poetry to make warm calls! Nice Senryu.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

That's right Frieda.
This is the reason why I came up with this confession.
I am blessed.. read more
The shortnesss of this poem is already on its own epitome. This is one thing to be proud of, Sir Zainul. Great job on using simplicity as strength and creating it as a piece that everyone would never tire to read. (:

I'm sorry for not always stopping by, I just stopped by now since I missed reading your works (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

(: thanks I'm glad to be of help (:
zainul

7 Years Ago

(:
Rhianne Ney

7 Years Ago

;D

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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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