Guilt

Friends have right to expect warm calls from their friends

Sense of guilt haunts me

Have not said hello for long

Friends expect warm calls

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

The shortnesss of this poem is already on its own epitome. This is one thing to be proud of, Sir Zainul. Great job on using simplicity as strength and creating it as a piece that everyone would never tire to read. (:

I'm sorry for not always stopping by, I just stopped by now since I missed reading your works (:

[zainul]

Dear Rhianne,
I feel very blessed to have such great generous admirer of my work.
Never mind for not being able for stopping by frequently.
I understand that a dedicated poet like you has to perform many assignments.
Best regards,
Zainul

[Rhianne Ney]

(: thanks I'm glad to be of help (:

[zainul]

(:

[Rhianne Ney]

;D

[RainC]

Simplicity speaks loudly when delivered with power!:) Nice!

[zainul]

Thank you Rain for the admiring review.
This means a lot to me :)

[writingurl14]

short sweet and to the point... I love it

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the admiring review.
This means a lot to me.

[Barbara Walker]

This short poem says so much! We get busy with our lives and the next thing you know, years have passed. We need to connect with our friends before its too late. Otherwise the guilt will just build and build. This poem really got me to thinking. Thank you!

[zainul]

I adore your amazing review.
Yes,we need to connect with our friends before its too late.
read moreI adore your amazing review.
Yes,we need to connect with our friends before its too late.
I feel glad that this poem got you to thinking :)

[myrt2013]

Written in the Haiku spirit, exalting goodness; well written, Haiku or not.

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet for the amazing review and generous compliments.

[myrt2013]

My pleasure!

[zainul]

:)

[Shelina Shariff-Zia]

You summed it all up, three lines that said a lot.

[zainul]

Thank you Shelina for the admiring review and compliments.

[Rogue]

That's a lovely set of words.. "Nice warm calls". It rolls right off the tongue and the sound makes one feel all warm and fuzzy. :)

I think your friends know you haven't forgotten them and your sincerity is true.

[zainul]

Hi Rogue,
Congratulations for introducing a wonderful phrase to wish friends.
Yes,"Nice warm calls" rolls right off the tongue and the sound makes one feel all warm and fuzzy.
I also thank you for certifying my sincerity among the learned friends.
Language is a dynamic entity.
Your lovely contribution has made my day. :)
Best regards,
Zainul

[Faith]

The simplicity of this is extremely effective, as is the message behind it. A very good poem, nicely done!

[zainul]

Thank you Faith for the wonderful words of review and compliments.
This means a world to me.

[SyberRose]

It is nice to hear a voice from friends as everything these days are Email...nicely done.
SyberRose

[zainul]

Thank you Syberose for your admiring review.
To me responding to reviews of lovely writers like you are also 'warm calls'.
I am very glad that you stopped by with your sweet smile.

[Frieda P]

We're all too busy engrossed in reading poetry to make warm calls! Nice Senryu.

[zainul]

That's right Frieda.
This is the reason why I came up with this confession.
I am blessed by your warm call now.
Best regards,
Zainul