Guilt

Guilt

A Poem by zainul
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Friends have right to expect warm calls from their friends

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Sense of guilt haunts me

Have not said hello for long

Friends expect warm calls

© 2013 zainul


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The shortnesss of this poem is already on its own epitome. This is one thing to be proud of, Sir Zainul. Great job on using simplicity as strength and creating it as a piece that everyone would never tire to read. (:

I'm sorry for not always stopping by, I just stopped by now since I missed reading your works (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

(: thanks I'm glad to be of help (:
zainul

11 Years Ago

(:
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

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A great poem and reminder to pick up the phone! I am guilty of not reaching out as I should

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review.
Please pick up the phone.
It will be very rewarding.read more
Your poem made me think about all the people who have passed through my life that I considered friends for a time but have somehow allowed to "escape." Perhaps most of us have the same sense of guilt expressed in your lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sharon for the precious comments.
This means a lot to me.
I like the sweet message which these few words can express …lovely write…now a days life is so hectic that we can't buy proper time for our freinds…
I do agree with the writer valentine as well…this would might make it an impeccable haiku…thanks for sharimg it with us!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Atiba for the enlightening review.
This means a lot to me.
I am very pleased f.. read more
The dark story

11 Years Ago

No need for thanks…that is why we are all here at wc…
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
To rid thyself of guilt; forgive.

I enjoyed this and empathize with you about calling friends just to say hello.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for the great suggestion.
I feel very pleased that you empathized with m.. read more
If you would put "time" at the end of the second line..you would have one of those Japaneze poems..Nice one..Kathie

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend.
I will reexamine the piece to revise it.
Thanks for the precious .. read more
Lovely write true these days we get carried away with the business of life and forget warm hearted calls.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very blessed by your precious words.
We become more business like,
But,forget to .. read more
Yes they do expect calls...or at least e-mails...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

That's right,dear friend.
I should return their love as soon as possible.
Thanks for sto.. read more
It is good to recognize and admit when we are remiss in keeping in contact. Your friends are still waiting.....I encourage you to call them!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sheila for the admiring comments and precious suggestions.
I will call them soon.read more
simply said beautifully written
guilt it is needed to be a great human being could you imagine a world guilt free
you always make me smile
sorry you feel guilty give your friends a call
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

That's right.
Friendship is mutual and an act of friendly gesture should be reciprocated prope.. read more
Holly Mason

11 Years Ago

Thank you for teaching me the proper way to spell-eloquently I will not forget*)
zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very honored,dear friend.

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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