Winner

Life can't be valueless

Life is a blessing

Its beauty grows forever

Love to see winners

Reviews

[areawakening]

Very thoughtful poem. Many people never realize how much of a blessing life is, and with or without our awareness its beauty does continue to grow forever. The last line is interesting, considering it includes the titular word "winner". I'm trying to wrap my head around what last message you are trying to convey here. Is it that we are all winners, because we all have the blessing of life? Is it a fragment of "I love to see winners"? Perhaps my favorite play on this last line is: "Love, to see winners." I'd be interested to hear the sentiments of the author!

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful thoughts.
You have nicely expressed my point of view.
Learned reviewers explained it from their point of views.
I think everyone has full right to consider a poem from her/his particular situation.
If the author fully describes his actual background or interpretation,the learned readers might
feel a little hurt.
Thank you Mitchell for the precious contribution.

[MOON]

Indeed life is a blessing often we don't see it , it's a miracle really!

[zainul]

Thank you Moon for the great review.
This means a world to me.:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Life is a blessing. Hmm is it true? A thought provoking piece.

[zainul]

Thank you Mehak for your approval.:)
This means a world to me.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime. :)

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

1. The title attracted my attention because I was curious as to what your perspective of what being a "Winner" means.

CONTENT

L i f e is a blessing. I agree with you here. I honestly believe that we are here for a purpose whether it be based on f a i t h or r e l i g i o n. B e a u t y is nature; we are apart of this organism.

To be honest, I agree with everything except the last line.

INTERPRETATION

Subjectively, winning does not mean everything. If anything, f a i l u r e is the most productive because it encourages to i m p r o v e. Life is also about confronting death. It is apart of the
balance of opposites.

FOOD FOR THOUGHT

1. This poem reminded me of Transcendentalist poetry which concentrates on nature to focus on lessons for everyday life.

CONCLUSION

Nice work, Zainul! You never cease to impress me!

[zainul]

Thank you Ria for the wonderful and systematic review.
I feel blessed to be a 'Winner' in the review work of the 'Review Expert' of WritersCafe.:)

[Vria P Crow]

haha Your welcome:D
My apologies if my reviews ever sound preachy. You let me know, Zainul! Honesty is key!
You are a "Winner"!

[zainul]

haha.
Sincerely speaking,I enjoy your approach.
This is a great opportunity for every member to learn from the collective talents visiting this site.
You must be appreciated for the time and talent you invest for writing a methodical review.
Younger ones who are students of literature and creative writing may learn from your efforts.
This is my honest feeling.
I adore you,lovely poet.:)

[Vria P Crow]

Awe. You flatter me again! haha This is why I love fellow writers because in real life, I suck at taking compliments!
I am happy someone appreciates my reviews.
Hmmm...This gives me an idea to seek out those lost little students. It is just I am 21 years old so I feel too young to be tutoring sometimes.
Thank you for your honesty!

I adore you too, majestic poet! :)

[zainul]

It seems that our conversation will never end on this issue.
Tutoring is a great passion.
read moreIt seems that our conversation will never end on this issue.
Tutoring is a great passion.
My daughter is about 22 now.
She is graduating soon from a university.
Her favorite play was mock tutoring when she was 7 or 8 years old.
She was too serious about it.
She used to lecture,write on a board and almost always was very reserve.
I remember how she was then.
I would like to see her as a professional teacher.
The world needs good teachers.
Please cherish your dream and share whatever you feel important and relevant.
There must be people who will receive for their own interest.
Thanks for the pleasant conversation,dear friend.:)

[Vria P Crow]

haha I am still reading and learning:D
Conversation ended.
Over and out!
Happy writing!

[zainul]

:D

[writingurl14]

this is great

[zainul]

Thank you my little friend for stopping by to decorate this piece with your lovely review.
I can see that you are going to be a winner at this early age.:)

[writingurl14]

thanks and that reminds me... guess what (what?) I AM GETTING PUBLISHED!

[zainul]

Yea,lovely friend.:)

[writingurl14]

thx

[❀ Gabriela ..]

What a beautiful poem! I love the first line especially, "Life is a blessing". I couldn't agree more! :)

[zainul]

Thank you Gabriela for the sweet compliments and admiring review.:)

[❀ Gabriela ❀]

You're most welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Dean Kuch®]

What a wonderful senryu, Beauty is, indeed, everywhere around us. Sometimes, we've simply got to stop and take the time to smell the roses, look up into a star-lit sky, sit and listen as raindrops pelt against the rooftops. All we need do is appreciate the splendid sights all 'round us...

[zainul]

Dean,thanks for the wonderful review.
This means a world to me.
Yes, we've simply got to stop and take the time to smell the roses, look up into a star-lit sky, sit and listen as raindrops pelt against the rooftops.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Dean Kuch®]

You are most welcome, my friend. Your poem was as lovely as it was inspiring.

[zainul]

This is a pleasure for us all.
I get the inspiration from great writers of WC. :)

[Johanna]

Lovely piece! sticks in your mind, nice! :)

[zainul]

Thank you Johanna for the amazing review.
Your wonderful words stick to my mind too.
Thanks for the sweet favor.:)

[Prritiy]

liked it, and yes life is blessing if its beauty grows :)

[zainul]

Thanks dear poet for stopping by to grace this piece.
I feel honored by your gesture.:)

[Prritiy]

oh but those words sounded a bit distant from you, after all it is you who brought me here :)

[zainul]

And you deserved a honorable place here and elsewhere by your own right.:)
I have to honor a talented person for the brilliance she has achieved.
However,I also accept your compliments for encouraging you to bloom your poetic talents.
Good luck,sweet friend.:)

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much for your affection :)

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure.:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sarah Khalil]

Lovely haiku, so breezy and easy and happy :)

[zainul]

Thanks Sarah Khalil for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.:)
This means a world to me.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, yes. Life is a game. We have to be the best player we could be. If not, we would miss its beauty and we'll not be that winners.

It's good to see winners...
Nice poem.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for defining life in the most straight forward way.
I completely agree with you that we have to be the best player we could be. If not, we would miss its beauty and we'll not be the winners.
I am very glad that you have reviewed so nicely.:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.