Nature

Nature

A Poem by zainul
"

Nature is the treasure of beauty and infinite wonder

"

When internet goes and miss my online friends

I feel very bad and  wait to see how it ends

Sometimes the connection comes  very soon

Then I think it this is a great boon

But,sometimes the internet does not come for hours

Then I curse for  everything and look for others

Today I lost the internet connection

I got angry and restless for genuine reason

 

Waiting for sometime  cursing the  service provider

I went to the veranda to take some fresh air

Looked down my flat to the plot cleared recently

For building a large  apartment  complex matching the city

Various plants and grasses grew on the vacant land

A piece of oasis came from nowhere by some magic wand

In the middle of the lovely forest  there was a little pond

Flowers of water lily bloomed there to create friendly bond

 

More scenes awaited me in the mundane garden

Many butterflies were flying in the flowery den

Suddenly a mongoose came into my sight

It was joined by several others from left and right

They were playing   special game that charmed my eyes

I thought a snake might be around to give me  surprise

At this point three jolly  kids rushed to the plot

The furry mammals ran away into a hidden slot

 

I became happy by the events and started to ponder

Nature is the treasure of beauty and infinite wonder

 

© 2013 zainul


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Unplugging is an enriching experience. It makes us see that the world does not revolve around our phones or televisions. My favorite line in the poem is when you describe the garden as mundane. Such a simple choice of words, but it feels like you are still angry and are hesitating to accept the beautiful gift of nature. Thank you for a jolly piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the wonderful review.
Your interpretation of my mood at that time is really enjoyab.. read more



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I loved the walk you shared with us in the Garden and loved the love you described found in the nature.
Yes nature to me is the Breath of Spirit found in all living things.
Here, there, everywhere. The breath of God.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

9 Years Ago

Thank you Connie for stopping by and grace the piece with your wonderful review.
I close my ey.. read more
Cryingkate

9 Years Ago

You did a wonderful job. I enjoy also when you share how the inspirations come to your writings.
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zainul

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for the inspiring compliments.:)
so true! in this day and age, we get so entangled in our online and indoor life at times that we forget the wonders and beauty and life that await for us outside. sometimes it takes a connection drop, to become reconnected! Very nice :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the inspiring review.
I appreciate your lovely words and compliments.
Unplugging is an enriching experience. It makes us see that the world does not revolve around our phones or televisions. My favorite line in the poem is when you describe the garden as mundane. Such a simple choice of words, but it feels like you are still angry and are hesitating to accept the beautiful gift of nature. Thank you for a jolly piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the wonderful review.
Your interpretation of my mood at that time is really enjoyab.. read more
Great work. Very lighthearted with an excellent message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by grace to grace this piece.
This means a world to me.
Jeff

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
zainul

10 Years Ago

My pleasure,talented writing friend.:)
I am spoiled. Nice write. Still, I just tell my stories to those around!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jon.
I am very pleased by your lovely review.
Your final words sealed this piece, securing your message within the poem. nature is my favorite topic to write about so enjoyed this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

I feel very glad that I met a pure nature lover in this site.
I already enjoyed some of your w.. read more
My Dear Writing Friend,
As for myself, I would rather have nature than the Net. I can hear and see the hand of the Great Mystery there. I have trouble finding that same serenity on a flat screen made by man. I enjoyed your write.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Dear Laughing-Bear,
This inspiring review has made my day.
I feel very glad that this pi.. read more

I am only a novice writer and
obviously, I don't know how to give reviews and comments about other people's works.
But this poem, as I was reading this, I realized that most of the time, we tend to forget about the beauty of our nature and our surroundings because we are so much entangled with just having our internet.
this is a good piece ^^.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

I am very impressed Alisah by your wonderful review.
I am feeling that an angel is inspiring .. read more
I was chuckling as I started reading this because I certainly know the frustration of an uncooperative internet! I love the message though and agree that we could all stand to "unplug" more and remember the world outside.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sioranth for your admiring review and strong support to my message.
I am very pleased t.. read more
Zainul,what would we do without the internet, it certainly has made the world a smaller place. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Will

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

You are very right,Will.Internet has certainly made the world a smaller place.It would not be possi.. read more

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Added on October 2, 2013
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Tags: nature, internet, connection, veranda, apartment, treasure, beauty, infinite, wonder, butterflies, mongoose, snake, kids, mammals, pond, water lily

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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