Why I'll never be wealthy and always be well

Why I'll never be wealthy and always be well

A Poem by Zatoichi

Everyday I greet the afternoon

with a hearty "Good morning"

and sing in the face of def-

 

initely the most of infinity

my finity can handle, the summer sun.

© 2018 Zatoichi


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Wagering the finity. Very good, i appreciate your wording, creative work my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The transition from the third line to the fourth made me smile! A witty and enjoyable poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a non-morning person. This is an amazing resumé, and the best part of it is remaining well in spite of what it may or may not bring. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

With this I can face the day.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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. greet on ... shine on ... more glory to you ... this is awe-inspiring ... sculpted with amazing precision in poetry and philosophy ... very consuming ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so so clever and gorgeous.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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clever, and in your face

Posted 13 Years Ago


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and sing and sing and sing

finity always slips through my fingers

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Zatoichi
Zatoichi

Laguna Niguel, CA



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