Creator

Creator

A Poem by z.chéri
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Creation & the creator

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A garden erupted from
inside of me and it 
seemed to be the only
beauty anyone ever 
commented on.

Everyone loves the creation
but never the creator.

Daisy and roses
which bloomed 
and everyone picked
for their lovers. 

Everyone loves the creation
while destroying the creator.

© 2017 z.chéri


Author's Note

z.chéri
:) - Melody x

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simple words can create magic and you once again proved it here

Posted 6 Years Ago


Love this it's so true very well written

Posted 6 Years Ago


very well penned i l loved your writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a thought provoking poem.
It can have many interpretations.
You are a unique and bold writer Melody:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is so true..I really love this..it's really beautiful...well written...and well versed ...keep writing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yeah, we never do appreciate the creator, but only love the creation...lovely poem, well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is great!! I really like this piece:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


and you are right,and more so every day

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really loved the metaphor. This is beautifully written and it has a very strong message that makes it all the more worth reading.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully written...i loved this.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on June 29, 2017
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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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