Fine

Well we didn't matter,
did we?
I can't quite understand
the feelings you are
trying to
c o n v e y.

Did I hurt you?
Did I make you fall in love
or did I make you repulse me?

Please use baby terms with
me because suddenly
I'm not understanding
the complex concepts
of
love and hate.
What is the difference?

You asked me how my day was;
Fine.
You asked me how I felt;
Fine.
Fine what?
Fine line between love and hate?
Fine line between the breaking
point of you and I?
Or am I just
f i n e?

Author's Note

Not really sure what this is. - Melody x (chéri)

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

So true....fine has many meanings and can be very confusing....but a fine little write as well..🌹

[Final-Karma]

There is a lot to this poem. On the surface it seems to be concept of trying to understand the hidden feelings of a significant other, but it is within that idealistic mind set that the true magic of this shines. "Am I just fine? A simple question that can deliver a world of answers because at the end of it all, only you can answer that question truthfully from within. Excellent work.

[Ms Paragon]

You can feel the anger and frustration building up with every question!Well done!

[z.chéri]

thank you!

[wordman]

a relationship seems to always be a fine line,guess we could cross any time

[AllauraRose]

Sounds cool! It shows the fall of a relationship and the after-taste. Very good poem, I really like it and how the concept of "fine" has many different meanings. Great job!

[z.chéri]

Yes! Thank you! :))

[sette]

i like the mystique in reading between the lines of this poem

[Coyote Poetry]

This is so good. I felt the anger and I liked the questions. Sometime we must stand our ground and need some answers. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[z.chéri]

Thank you! I always love receiving comments from you! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.