Luck & Love

Luck & Love

A Poem by Greg Agee
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Something I wrote for a friend. Decided it was a nice piece

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We always fall in love at the most unthinkable times.
With a person we never expected to meet or fall in love with.
Love does its own thing.
Regardless of what you want.
So, if there is a time when its your thing.
Just let it do what it will.
Understand that its no more in control than you are.
Know, that if you're not getting what you expected,
You're in really good company.
Luck and Love seem to go hand in hand.
So if your lucky enough to be in love and Loving enough to nourish it.
Then I wish you Luck and Love and Luck in Love.
Wish me back and remember, if its not like you want it.
Its probably not. Get Lucky,
Look for Love and not what isn't.
You already got that answer.
Find someone that is lucky enough to Love you and knows it.
Don't miss out on someone that really loves you.
That's as lucky as it gets.

© 2016 Greg Agee


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Greg Agee
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Hi! Thanks a lot for sharing this poem. A food for thought regarding Life, Love and Luck. This would serve as a great reminder of how one must be patient and must be stand firm with Time. Thanks a lot!

I would also like to clarify you regarding this sentence:

"So, if their is a time when its your thing." Sin't this supposed to be - "So, if THERE is a time when its your thing."

Or is this your style? Kindly clarify me please. Thanks! :)


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and the correction., I appreciate it ,
TheMalady

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)



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Great write and deliver a perfect massage

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish you luck and love and luck in love:-)....well,I am still waiting to get lucky in love...beautiful and very well written..:-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Greg Agee

3 Years Ago

Thank You !
Mary Helda Akongo

3 Years Ago

You are welcome:-)
I really like how you started it!
Well done!
Keep it up!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great expansion of the common phrase: "We love who we love" . . . except that, in your poem, there's an important distinction. I'm hearing you say, it's OK to accept the unexpectedness of how love happens, embrace it, consider it, but if it doesn't make you feel better, maybe it's time to keep your eyes open for further opportunities. This is a beautiful blend of acceptance & common sense. Keep your arms open to all unexpected gifts of love, but also don't stay stuck in a punishing situation.

My favorite line: "So if your lucky enough to be in love and Loving enough to nourish it." (especially the last five words) . . . "your" should be "you're" (if you're into corrections).

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Greg Agee

3 Years Ago

Corrected , thank you my friend !
good thought....
"Luck and Love seem to go hand in hand" agreed...
thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time I appreciate it very much
Hi! Thanks a lot for sharing this poem. A food for thought regarding Life, Love and Luck. This would serve as a great reminder of how one must be patient and must be stand firm with Time. Thanks a lot!

I would also like to clarify you regarding this sentence:

"So, if their is a time when its your thing." Sin't this supposed to be - "So, if THERE is a time when its your thing."

Or is this your style? Kindly clarify me please. Thanks! :)


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and the correction., I appreciate it ,
TheMalady

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
I agree Greg.
"Don't miss out on someone that really loves you.
That's as lucky as it gets."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Greg Agee

3 Years Ago

Thank you my kind friend I appreciate your time, very much !
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Greg.
There's nothing as precarious as love! So when it strikes, embrace it. Your poem is lovely and should be a message for us all.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very well written prose and very true. It is a very simple way to look at and act accordingly, I am pretty sure your friend was helped by it a lot. Not much to say because you would know how I might feel when I read this. Thank you for sharing ^^

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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