Shoe...

Shoe...

A Poem by zendikar
"

my shoe.. duh

"
I saw my shoe
all broken and torn
and wondered how it felt,
it was beaten up that's for sure
worn even through its sole,
but was it proud
of its vigorous runs,
its mountain climbing too?
It walked through snow and ice,
survived three dogs,
and the smell of my feet,
pee ewww...
So was my shoe a warrior
or an article of clothing
this question i leave to you....

(I need new shoes)

Axel Zendikar

© 2010 zendikar


Author's Note

zendikar
I really wrote this about my shoe! lol

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will get you a new pair of scandals.... great stuff there man, I love stuff like that that is so simple yet I can sense bigger issues lurking behind the scenes, your style man is good... like it..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fantastic poem :D
Thanks for checking out mine =]]
it is very similar lol :DD
Awesome job!!
My converse sneakers are broken and torn hahaha :-P

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is fantastic!!! A shoe with emotion... what a great image!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol. Cute little piece on shoe appreciation. I like the rhyme and you told the story well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha! What a GREAT write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was an amusing poem. =) your shoes are qquite the troopers and im sure you do need new shoes

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think your poems are great and funny - although not so funny if you dont really have any shoes. I couldnt help reading this like a song so maybe with the help of a guitar this could be a great tune - try it and you will get your shoes.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Shoes can definitely hold our souls in tack in many circumstances which makes them warriors in my opinion. I like the playfullness of this piece. Fun POV...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow..to be honest when i saw the title i thought of just how u randomly say shoe and i was like oh my god he's an idiot. But now that i have read it i can easily say that this is a pretty well written poem. I like it a lot Rob.

Posted 13 Years Ago


hmm..i think if they took you up mountains they are warriors :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 5, 2010
Last Updated on July 10, 2010
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zendikar
zendikar

Stroudsburg, PA



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im a simple guy i like to write things that are fairly short and to the point but with hidden deeper meanings! I also love having fun! Read my writings to learn more about me! more..

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