An Eternal Nightmare

An Eternal Nightmare

A Poem by waking-life
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A thousand dreams. 
A thousand deaths. 

A thousand bullets in a chest. 

A thousand wounds. 
A thousand tears. 

A pain that last a thousand years

- DD  

© 2010 waking-life


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ingenious. inventive

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love how this is short and simple but so meaningful! Completely captivating/mesmerizing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It sounds likea quote from some long dead, learned scholar who has seen too much pain for one lifetime.

In other words

My God, it is awesome.
That is all my brain can come up with

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Whoa!!! I might want to pay you for this one and put it in my novel as the riddle in the tomb scene...lolz...This was great!!...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, strong and great!
A perfect combination,
I hope you keep at it
Greetings

Sarah

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering what is it??

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you've engaged me completely~ this breathes almost like a riddle~ where at the end I lean closer~ mind spinning wondering "what is it!" ~ very clever~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 20, 2010
Last Updated on September 20, 2010
Tags: Dark, Dream, Nightmare, Eternal, Bullets, Chest, Thousand

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waking-life
waking-life

Bobland, NY



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