~ A Vase Without A Base ~

~ A Vase Without A Base ~

A Poem by waking-life
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...false value...

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Empty Vessel...

Lacking Knowledge. 


Polished.. 

But Barren. 

Lacking A Core.


A Piece.. of Forgotten Artistry. 


 Forever-More...


 Porcelain of Vanity.

© 2011 waking-life


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Brief, but empowering and
very creative DD nicely done
my friend…


Posted 10 Years Ago


oh the meat of this is rich and savory as it turns its words inside out to reveal that beauty without subsrance is hollow~ so hollow

Posted 10 Years Ago


empty vessel indeed, like a child who doesn't experience education in their lifetime. very beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Even the most beautiful vase is nothing if it can not be shown, excellent piece of poetry my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The imagery here is beautifully wrapped around the stunning thought that such a so called piece of forgotten artistry is not so much forgotten but silent....lost in myriad ways - I love this! Vanity is something so noticed but not at the same time!
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


Simple but yet it screams a deeper meaning another job well done :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 27, 2011
Last Updated on May 27, 2011
Tags: knowledge, emptiness, self, loathing, vanity

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waking-life
waking-life

Bobland, NY



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