Give Me A Bisquit

Fun, right, it's just for fun, right.

Ew.

What an awful, disgusting feeling.
I am a delicate, soft ceramic cup
only a quarter way full
and three quarters the way
unfulfilled;

it is easy to expect a lot from other cups
but many of them do not like to share their tea.
There is a pretty rose tea pot,
who speaks like a porcelain, romantic Victorian,
that, apparently, does not like to share it's haughty chai.

I have made a sacrifice,
I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy,
so that I could sport the juice of my lovely
but here I sit, by the stove, hot and shattering
Feeling green, but not relaxed.
Only a quarter way full,
and three quarters the way
Unfulfilled.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Give Me a Biscuit'
Hurdy,
'only a quarter way full
and three quarters the way
unfulfilled''
Above line repeated beginning and end of poem. It is true what we possess within is not apparent until revealed. I like how you used the loveliness of teapot and cups, porcelain and such to give this poem its substance. Then;
'I have made a sacrifice,
I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy,'
I suppose their is no guarantee that every effort to show
love or kindness is welcomed as we try to reveal our inner self to another.
Beautiful and revealing.
Blessings,
Kathy

[writer in trial]

I loved it. :)
It's cute. And it seems to me more cuter because i imagined these feelings of jealousy and sadness in cups only. just like in cartoons where non living things got eyes and smileys. In that way i felt and enjoyed it.
What a pretty and cute cup.
I wish he will get his dream chai soon to make him completely filled. :D

[Hurdy]

Thank you. :)

Yes, having those feelings embodied in cups was sort of cathartic. It made the whole thing more amusing and minute. Apparently, if you hold a magnifying glass, on it's reverse side, over a wound (so that it is zoomed out), the pain will lessen. It is sort of the same idea here, haha.

Me too, but maybe High Tea isn't this cup's thing, lol.

[writer in trial]

:D :D
This way of imagining things is actually a right way to lessen the pain and brings smile on face :D
I got one tip today how to relax yourself ;)

[L.u.c.a.s.]

I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy. Beautifully written and brought a huge smile to my face thanks! =D

[Hurdy]

Haha seriously!

Thanks. I think it is a lot lighter than my other stuff. When I felt this way, writing the poem amused me and helped me to move on, lol.

[L.u.c.a.s.]

And that is why we write woohooo!!!!!! =D