Give Me A Bisquit

Give Me A Bisquit

A Poem by Hurdy
"

Fun, right, it's just for fun, right.

"
Ew.

What an awful, disgusting feeling.
I am a delicate, soft ceramic cup
only a quarter way full
and three quarters the way
unfulfilled;

it is easy to expect a lot from other cups
but many of them do not like to share their tea.
There is a pretty rose tea pot,
who speaks like a porcelain, romantic Victorian,
that, apparently, does not like to share it's haughty chai.

I have made a sacrifice,
I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy,
so that I could sport the juice of my lovely
but here I sit, by the stove, hot and shattering
Feeling green, but not relaxed.
Only a quarter way full,
and three quarters the way
Unfulfilled.

© 2013 Hurdy


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'Give Me a Biscuit'
Hurdy,
'only a quarter way full
and three quarters the way
unfulfilled''
Above line repeated beginning and end of poem. It is true what we possess within is not apparent until revealed. I like how you used the loveliness of teapot and cups, porcelain and such to give this poem its substance. Then;
'I have made a sacrifice,
I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy,'
I suppose their is no guarantee that every effort to show
love or kindness is welcomed as we try to reveal our inner self to another.
Beautiful and revealing.
Blessings,
Kathy


Posted 9 Months Ago


I loved it. :)
It's cute. And it seems to me more cuter because i imagined these feelings of jealousy and sadness in cups only. just like in cartoons where non living things got eyes and smileys. In that way i felt and enjoyed it.
What a pretty and cute cup.
I wish he will get his dream chai soon to make him completely filled. :D


Posted 7 Years Ago


Hurdy

7 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

Yes, having those feelings embodied in cups was sort of cathartic. It ma.. read more
writer in trial

7 Years Ago

:D :D
This way of imagining things is actually a right way to lessen the pain and brings smile.. read more
I have poured out my own into the cups of the enemy. Beautifully written and brought a huge smile to my face thanks! =D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hurdy

7 Years Ago

Haha seriously!

Thanks. I think it is a lot lighter than my other stuff. When I felt t.. read more
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L.u.c.a.s.

7 Years Ago

And that is why we write woohooo!!!!!! =D

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