Extinct

Extinct

A Poem by Yann Bellemare

The sheets stink
Well-being; extinct
Where are you Themis ?
All justice; subverted
Thoughts coil
Pitying a damaged soul
Vicious circle
Temptations
Amidst the bottle
The surrounding shadows
Swirl
Their cold touch reminds
That justice
Is never served

© 2014 Yann Bellemare


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Thought provoking and insightful. The way you have played with the words is worthy of reverence. The Goddess gone astray and the idea of justice debased. Brilliant.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh, very nice... i loved the raw feeling it gave while reading, like a striping down to the core... Also the abstract images intermix in my mind, creating a lovely painting that i can admire for hours. Wonderful work Yann!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Interesting word salad, fun read

Posted 6 Years Ago


So many different directions I could attempt to connect this with. I'm not going to try to though, as this is the type of poem everyone will relate to on a personal level, which is strong. Nice job.

-Matt

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Yann Bellemare
Yann Bellemare

Quebec, Canada



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