Intimacy

Intimacy

A Poem by Quietstorm

Meeting you was no accident, we crossed paths for all the right reasons. We didn't accidentally bump into each other, you found me at the right SEASON,

at a moment in my life where my
Heart couldn't stop freezing, but
Over time you've given me a reason
to keep breathing, keep believing
that LOVE will find me.

You introduced me to this thing we call *INTIMACY*
Intimacy that was non-physical, not the traditional "get me hot and wet", pumping and sweating til my river overflows uncontrollably,

But, INTIMACY without the sex.
I want you to make love to my mind that will allow my mental climax to send pressure points through my soul.

I want to Have and to Hold you in the physical, while getting acquainted with the mental.
I want you to hold me
as if it were the last time.

We relax and unwind,
Soft music plays in the background as you rub your fingers through my hair, lying face to face , your eyes meet my glare, hands never glide
down,
it stays above my waist , as we pace ourselves for the mental embrace,Kisses full of passion, but the kisses never left my face,

we discovered that we're not ready to involve every body part,
Only to stimulate the mind, and focus on the heart.
Together we'll indulge in whatever comes next.

I'll give you Intimacy in every way , but as for now
We will indulge ourselves in
INTIMACY Without the sex

© 2018 Quietstorm



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I really love this poem. It's about that aspect of love that's often overlooked. We can appreciate each other's heart, mind and soul, without sex being the only focal point. We can spend time in each other's presence, doing things together, enjoy nature, holding hands, making eye contact, enjoy a warm and long hug without sex being the goal.
Sex can only be described as the cherry on the cake, because intimacy involves much more than just sex. A relationship requires a holistic 360 degrees level of attention between man and woman.

I AGREE WITH YOUR POEM
IT WAS WELL WRITTEN WITH RHYTHM
WELL DONE!!!!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow!!!!! It's so deep. I like how you pointed the spiritual part of intimacy. Nice writing 👍

Posted 1 Month Ago


I really love this poem. It's about that aspect of love that's often overlooked. We can appreciate each other's heart, mind and soul, without sex being the only focal point. We can spend time in each other's presence, doing things together, enjoy nature, holding hands, making eye contact, enjoy a warm and long hug without sex being the goal.
Sex can only be described as the cherry on the cake, because intimacy involves much more than just sex. A relationship requires a holistic 360 degrees level of attention between man and woman.

I AGREE WITH YOUR POEM
IT WAS WELL WRITTEN WITH RHYTHM
WELL DONE!!!!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write! I love the flow. Nothing wrong with some extended foreplay!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Your poem conveys the essence of intimacy. Revealing our hearts and souls to each other is intimacy, not shedding our clothes. It's vulnerability, the strength to show it, and the desire to see it, that is true intimacy. And, as your poem implies, it's so rare. An original, insightful work.

Posted 6 Months Ago



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Quietstorm
Quietstorm

Dallas, TX



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I'm an aspiring poet, looking to spread light to those who may be in a dark place. I've been writing poetry for 15 years, but it has been more of a hobby, even though its a passion of mines. I recentl.. more..

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