Detonation

Detonation

A Poem by Anjali

I finally found satisfaction,
From all that distraction.

Felt like a detonation,
Barely survived from that situation.

It was hard to grasp anything,
Even oxygen.
Compared myself with nothing,
But contradictions.

Thank God,
I finally found satisfaction.

But, your presence makes me remember that situation.
But, I look ahead and leave with a Blockbuster detonation.

© 2017 Anjali



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It's interesting how much you described with few words. I particularly like the last line. Walking away with a blockbuster detonation, that seems so cool.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Anjali

5 Months Ago

Thank you!
Short but it says a lot.
Fourth stanza should be I thank god or simply thank god.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Anjali

9 Months Ago

Thanks!! I've edited it.
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on September 16, 2017
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Anjali
Anjali

Delhi, India



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Hi, I'm anjali, a 16 year old writer, reader and crafter. I'm new at writing poetry and I'm still learning. Hope you like the writings I share.😊 more..

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