Beekeeper

Beekeeper

A Poem by Annie Gryphon

How noisy the bees
whispering
in block house timbers
when milky yoghurt light
creeps into night
and secretly
takes a bath in the fjord.

© 2015 Annie Gryphon



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Ohhh, Annie!
What's to say when a piece so lavishly rendered falls upon the senses with its sweet splendor of imagery and deeply suggestive allure … MMmmm! I love the taste of honey on the tongue, and the light milky yogurt in the fjord … well, it's a sensual delight, to say the least. Seems I feel a deep, softly whispered buzz!

So much conveyed in so few words, M'Lady — however do you do it … ummm?
Thank you for a deliciously scrumptuous, poetical treat, Dear Annie ⁓ Richard

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

Thank you, dear Richard. I appreciate the energy you put into your reviewing so much.



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I'm looking out and over a lakefront at the moment and this poem really fits the mood and place.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

6 Days Ago

thank you, Chris, and it makes me happy to hear from you again, after long time
how lovely you blend the senses with the fluid, static, sound and light

Posted 2 Years Ago


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I can hear the bees whispering so as not to wake there Queen while the moon gazes at its reflection rolling on the fiord... Loved this very well written packs a mighty punch!

Posted 2 Years Ago



Great poetry.
We could use more bees.
----Eagle Cruagh

Posted 2 Years Ago


Oh wow...impressive! Nature's bounty with personal tinge, gorgeous! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

thank you, Poppy!
why isn't this getting more attention. brilliantly written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

Thank you, your words and your profile picture makes me smile.
just another mac without her

2 Years Ago

you are welcome, is a complete day when you can make somebody smile :)
Ohhh, Annie!
What's to say when a piece so lavishly rendered falls upon the senses with its sweet splendor of imagery and deeply suggestive allure … MMmmm! I love the taste of honey on the tongue, and the light milky yogurt in the fjord … well, it's a sensual delight, to say the least. Seems I feel a deep, softly whispered buzz!

So much conveyed in so few words, M'Lady — however do you do it … ummm?
Thank you for a deliciously scrumptuous, poetical treat, Dear Annie ⁓ Richard

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie Gryphon

2 Years Ago

Thank you, dear Richard. I appreciate the energy you put into your reviewing so much.

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Annie Gryphon
Annie Gryphon

Otter River , somewhere in the world



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Annie looks different now. She took away her mask. Writing poetry in English is fun for me, a very special pleasure (my native and daily life language is German). Reviews are welcome in any way.. more..

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