Screams of Conscience

Screams of Conscience

A Poem by Raven Moonchild

Hello, writer's block, my old friend.
I've come to scream at you again.
Because the poem I was thinking,
 left my mind while I was drinking.
And the picture, that was dancing in my head,
lies there dead.
No more the screams of conscience.

Out of mind, I trudged to home.
Empty seats within the dome.
Teeth of widow slowly clamp,
 I wouldn't bother with the gold or tamp.
Empty lies are touched in the clash of dione's fright,
 without the light,
and grabbed the screams of conscience.

Within the dated sight we draw.
In house and steeple, shady shore.
Ample walking throughout shrieking,
 trample jeering devout asking.
Fearful axing wrongs with branches amber flare,
 and all that care,
unnerve the screams of conscience.

Ghouls, I cry, few to spot grow.
Consciense strike the armor's pose.
Clearing high birds at height beach too.
Break alarms to delight each hue.
In thy thirds, spike arrant hilltop's wells.
That narrowed in the hells of conscience.

With the beagle loud and grayed,
 from the bygone flawed of May.
With the wine stashed spout in brawling,
 in the curds that it was aging.
With the shrine dead, the blurred from the bandit were smitten at the highway falls.
The bewitchment calls,
 and altered the screams of conscience.

© 2017 Raven Moonchild



Author's Note

Raven Moonchild
Okay, it's been a long time since I made a poem like this. So, reviewers, hit me with your best shot. :)

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I love this!!!!!!!!!!! You're unfortunately not hitting all the beats on I count 4 - 5 lines (you're lacking words to carry you forward). But this is amazing! I love doing these types of challenges (I myself have written 3 so far, which I will post when I get to that phase of my "career".....I've yet to reach the end of my first phase in my posting). Now what I absolutely loved about this was that many of the words are actually rhymes to the words sung in the song, which is fantastic!! Utterly brilliant!! (almost like a misheard lyrics spoof). Favourite ones: "In house and steeple" (ten thousand people), and "fearful axing wrongs" (people writing songs). Good homage! Well done!

(note on punctuation....many periods at the end of lines shouldn't be there since the lines that follow share the same thought)

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emipoemi

4 Months Ago

Righto....it's just never heard of "tamp" before, so I wanted to know what you were getting at.
Raven Moonchild

4 Months Ago

lol Well, there you go. Plus, just got done fixing the poem. Again, thank you EVER so much for your .. read more
emipoemi

4 Months Ago

always with pleasure.



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Raven Moonchild, this is high voltage the energy that flow from this is outstanding. "teeth of widow slowly clamp" very nice the imagery strong and perfect. It is an over all brilliant write.

Sheer Terror

Posted 2 Months Ago


*Applauds*... Am I ever one to be beset upon by "old friends"... Especially unsavory ones... Teeth of widow slowly clamp... Altered screams... Very well penned...

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raven Moonchild

4 Months Ago

I was singing while creating this. lol :) I plan to sing this while playing guitar one day. :D
Silente

4 Months Ago

Do it... If you do not... I will be disappointed in you. Lol
Raven Moonchild

4 Months Ago

Sir, yes sir!!! :D (throws horns in salute)
I'm sure Simon and Garfunkle would find this amusing. I could never find words that accurate. Nicely done. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raven Moonchild

4 Months Ago

(hugs) Thank you, Tim. :)
lol.you already had me at the first line..but the rest is just magnificent...

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raven Moonchild

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :)
Deep, dark exuberance

Awesome Read

Matthew

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this!!!!!!!!!!! You're unfortunately not hitting all the beats on I count 4 - 5 lines (you're lacking words to carry you forward). But this is amazing! I love doing these types of challenges (I myself have written 3 so far, which I will post when I get to that phase of my "career".....I've yet to reach the end of my first phase in my posting). Now what I absolutely loved about this was that many of the words are actually rhymes to the words sung in the song, which is fantastic!! Utterly brilliant!! (almost like a misheard lyrics spoof). Favourite ones: "In house and steeple" (ten thousand people), and "fearful axing wrongs" (people writing songs). Good homage! Well done!

(note on punctuation....many periods at the end of lines shouldn't be there since the lines that follow share the same thought)

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emipoemi

4 Months Ago

Righto....it's just never heard of "tamp" before, so I wanted to know what you were getting at.
Raven Moonchild

4 Months Ago

lol Well, there you go. Plus, just got done fixing the poem. Again, thank you EVER so much for your .. read more
emipoemi

4 Months Ago

always with pleasure.

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I'm a 22 year old Pansexual Pagan who has been a poet for nearly ten years. I come from a big, open minded and heavy metal loving family. :) I hope you enjoy my work. more..

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