A Poem by Raven Moonchild

Drawing me in;
willing moth to tempting flame.

Promises of forever;
lovers from fantasy.

I gave you my heart,
only your's to keep.

I gave you my tears,
quenching your insatiable thirst.

I heard you laugh as I was bound,
darkness creeping near

I heard the locks click,
my soul damned.

© 2017 Raven Moonchild

Author's Note

Raven Moonchild
I'm writing a new series of poems based off of old poems I have about heartbreak and betrayal. Do let me know what you think. :)

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beautiful words and i really loved it

Posted 7 Months Ago

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Raven Moonchild

7 Months Ago

Thanks, mate. :)
Well girl sounds dumb... But this reality is happening every where... What a lovely word love.... I guess we will not meet soon........ Lol

Nice work raven

Posted 7 Months Ago


7 Months Ago

Well if you have that much time you can read my poems they depicts me perfectly... Than you can just.. read more
Raven Moonchild

7 Months Ago

I shall definitely give your work a look when I can. :)

7 Months Ago


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Added on August 6, 2017
Last Updated on August 6, 2017


Raven Moonchild
Raven Moonchild


I'm a 22 year old Pansexual Pagan who has been a poet for nearly ten years. I come from a big, open minded and heavy metal loving family. :) I hope you enjoy my work. more..

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