In Sorrow

In Sorrow

A Poem by Raven Moonchild
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Annie was at the end of her little orphan rope.

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The gun'll come out,
 in sorrow.
Threat of bedlam collar
 brat in sorrow,
  tear'll be won.

Rust sinkin' throughout
 in sorrow,
  fears betray the godhead.
None to follow,
 'til cares shun.

Then I'm struck in a way
 to slay,
  the weary.
I must pick out thy sin,
 and gin;
  the prey.

The gun'll come out,
 in sorrow.
So ya caught a fang on
 swill in sorrow;
  scum that spray.

In sorrow,
 in sorrow,
  above ya.
In sorrow.

Sure ablaze
 the ray
  decay.

In sorrow,
 in sorrow,
  above ya.
In sorrow.

Sure ablaze
 the ray
  decay.


© 2017 Raven Moonchild



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Spoofs are always a good source of entertainment! Particularly when executed well. And this one was executed tremendously! Well done!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raven Moonchild

1 Week Ago

lol Thank you. :) I love to put my own twist on classics. :D
*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

Scum decays in a blaze... Bedlam sat within the foundation of this rockin' poetic slam... Whew... *Metal horns*

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raven Moonchild

2 Weeks Ago

lol Thanks, mate. I knew you'd appreciate "Little Orphan Dani". :D
Silente

2 Weeks Ago

Haha... I did, and you are welcome...
This made me laugh out loud. 3,000 bonus points for actually getting me to sing it out loud on the second and third reads!! 👏

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raven Moonchild

2 Weeks Ago

lol I loved Little Orphan Annie as a kid and the other day, one of my brothers started singing the s.. read more
Lethally Casual

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 2 Weeks Ago



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I'm a 22 year old Pansexual Pagan who has been a poet for nearly ten years. I come from a big, open minded and heavy metal loving family. :) I hope you enjoy my work. more..

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