Noise In Hues

Noise In Hues

A Poem by Asante.

Pink morning clouds
sweep the night away,
an infant breeze
holding off the gale
of instant life.

Transparency,
peace --
two things
I can only be
between fleeting glimmers of quiet.

And so the daylight
is a noose to silence
'til the rope loosens
as a sun dies
where the moon rises.

© 2016 Asante.



Author's Note

Asante.
Written before class, fittingly.

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Very fitting I say. Another perfectly crafted piece. I love the use of colors and the soft attributes you chose to describe this scenery. You captured the shift from day to night and the feelings it conjures very well.
I can relate to the middle part of your poem, and I also find it almost astounding how you managed to express, to realize this motion just with your words.
The night seems to be a comforting time for you, as it is for me too, also the most creative (mainly) in my case. This reminds me of a quote: 'Night is purer than day. It is better for thinking, and loving, and dreaming. At night everything is more intense, more true. The echo of words that have been spoken during the day takes on a new and deeper meaning" Elie Wiesel, Dawn.
Your poem also makes my mind go back to a picture I took about 5 years ago in Paris. We arrived at dawn and the sky was pink, the pink hues reflecting on the Seine. An almost surreal shot. One of my nicest memories.
Take care, talent ;)

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

5 Days Ago

You nailed many things in that response. :)

The night is where I write a vast majorit.. read more
Βανέσα

4 Days Ago

You're abs right, my strongest/best works were written at night or dawn when everything is still glo.. read more



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As you said. It's very fitting. I like how you used the colour of the font to capture the innocent vibe of theis poem.
I agree that peace is hard to find and is mostly found in the most uncommon places/.,
Well Done!

Posted 3 Hours Ago


Very fitting I say. Another perfectly crafted piece. I love the use of colors and the soft attributes you chose to describe this scenery. You captured the shift from day to night and the feelings it conjures very well.
I can relate to the middle part of your poem, and I also find it almost astounding how you managed to express, to realize this motion just with your words.
The night seems to be a comforting time for you, as it is for me too, also the most creative (mainly) in my case. This reminds me of a quote: 'Night is purer than day. It is better for thinking, and loving, and dreaming. At night everything is more intense, more true. The echo of words that have been spoken during the day takes on a new and deeper meaning" Elie Wiesel, Dawn.
Your poem also makes my mind go back to a picture I took about 5 years ago in Paris. We arrived at dawn and the sky was pink, the pink hues reflecting on the Seine. An almost surreal shot. One of my nicest memories.
Take care, talent ;)

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

5 Days Ago

You nailed many things in that response. :)

The night is where I write a vast majorit.. read more
Βανέσα

4 Days Ago

You're abs right, my strongest/best works were written at night or dawn when everything is still glo.. read more
Last stanza...sweet! I agree noise certainly has a palette, variable energy if you will!
I enjoy the late hours it's still and Curtis is peaceful! I usually write most of my songs or arrange music then too. Great piece bro! R xo

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

6 Days Ago

Spot on! The wee hours of the night bring a strange sense of creativity that I can't even really exp.. read more
A noose to silence...
I really like that.
There are different shades of noise but I personally love quiet solitude. I love the night. Everyone sleeps, all is quiet and calm and no one is fighting, screaming or yelling. (Unless they sleep talk) :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

1 Week Ago

Likewise, Ana. The night is a pretty peaceful setting, depending on where you live. :) That aside, i.. read more
~Papaya~

1 Week Ago

My pleasure. :)
The sounds of birds waking the pink of sunrise to their lullaby for the deep red of sunset followed by the silent blue gold of moonlight.
These are the images created in my mind after reading your poem and considering the title .
Most enjoyable and evocative .

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

1 Week Ago

You drew some excellent images from this, Norman. Blessings, and thanks for stopping by.
The transition of morning to night... For some reason, I'm always captivated by a simple concept written deeper in a piece of literature. This poem seems to portray night as the bringer of peace and silence, which is relatable because most people contemplate when the sun slumbers. However, in the morning, everyone is more busy and hardly have the time to stop and relax. The night and morning bring out different ambiances and with that, a new type of life. Thank you for sharing this!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

1 Week Ago

An excellent take on this! As someone who, for a while, worked best in the peak of the night, the ri.. read more
The morning is a beautiful time, but also dreadful if you have a lot to do that day. We wish to rush to bed, only to wake up and do it all over again. Great work Sante :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

2 Weeks Ago

I'm late on the response, but good way of wording it with that second line, Amber! I'm glad you enjo.. read more
The sun loved the moon so much
he died every night to let her breathe...
And you have written another piece for my library, sir :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

1 Month Ago

I genuinely hadn't made that connection when writing this, great catch!

Thank you, Ly.. read more
Sante, you never fail to impress me...wow...so colourful in its articulation and gives me the impression of someone who has mastered the art of just being in the throes of life and its continual cycles...stunning...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

1 Month Ago

I'm always honored, Pop. Always humbled by your commentary, truly. Many thanks. :)
Love the antitheses of the sun dying and the moon rising bro and its theme throughout the poem. You begun with the morning sweep away the previous night and then the night doing the same to the day in a very rad way bro.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

1 Month Ago

Like you, I love to create polarizing natures, dual forces in writings. I'm glad you're digging this.. read more

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