Exorcism

Exorcism

A Poem by Cyntax

Expectations dwindle - fairness unexpected,
Fruits of masculinity, frequently dissected.
Exorcise my membrane, but you won't respect it,
Imperfection's logo, but try to perfect it.

DNA bleeds and pores encapsulate,
The clock keeps ticking... hard to not procrastinate.

Time's not on the side, humans aren't either,
Ibuprofren's angels calm lucifer's fever.

I'm street classiness. Prissy, clean thuggery,
Jesus hosts the circus. satan tends to juggle me.

Deep as the abyss. Drown in my spirit.
Gasp for invisible air... with my lyric.

Eternal battle's fight against nepotism.
Rebirth. Renew. Rethink. Exorcism.



© 2017 Cyntax



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This is my first read of one of your posts. So, read it, nodded; read it again, smiled; third read, nodded and smiled and.. realised my right foot was tapping the sheet! Your meter is just incredible, you write dancing letters. As to the actual words - different, exciting, interesting. Different inasmuch i think they refer in some convuluted way to mind exorcism, not going to delve each phrase.What or who needs analysis anyway!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

2 Months Ago

Agreed! And yes, your take on this is spot on. Thanks so much for your feedback.



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a very well written poem "
Time's not on the side, humans aren't either,
Ibuprofren's angels calm lucifer's fever.
" this is simply genius

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Sir! Very grateful for your words.
This is my first read of one of your posts. So, read it, nodded; read it again, smiled; third read, nodded and smiled and.. realised my right foot was tapping the sheet! Your meter is just incredible, you write dancing letters. As to the actual words - different, exciting, interesting. Different inasmuch i think they refer in some convuluted way to mind exorcism, not going to delve each phrase.What or who needs analysis anyway!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

2 Months Ago

Agreed! And yes, your take on this is spot on. Thanks so much for your feedback.
You never disappoint : )
Dark, yet sexy piece.
Would love to hear this over a smooth beat.


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much. Always appreciated!
Exorcisms fascinate me, the whole idea of them...and this metaphor works perfectly, when we think of those evil/negative thoughts that we need to exorcise from our hearts, minds and spirits..
i especially like "Ibuprofen's angels calm Lucifer's fever"--i wish i had written that line.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

5 Months Ago

Always honored by your feedback. Thank you, Sir.
WOW! Dude! This is some amazing work. It sort of reminded me of something Avenged Sevenfold would do. (Sorry if that comparison is offending, your musical taste is unknown to me). Anyway, I love the words you used. I feel in love with this line:
"Ibuprofren's angels calm Lucifer's fever."

It is amazing. Please keep writing more like this!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cyntax

5 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Ashley. Much appreciated!

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