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Your Version Of Love

Your Version Of Love

A Poem by DuffyDreamer
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Read and see...

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A white, blank page lies in front on me. Yet in my mind the paper is ripped, tainted with so much ink there's hardly room for white to peek through. 


Same is true with you.


You're tainted and wrecked, you were from day one. You have so much to show and your burdens are ever present. The gore oozes from your skin and the darkness slithers down your body. The only light left is a sliver in your chest. When the angle is just right, I can see the faint glow. But you hardly turn that angle, you are scared to show that light. So we go back and forth in a fight; I don't know whether you're salvable or not. I've been in this for the long run but my hands are starting to get covered in you. It started off only on my nails but it's creeped it's way up to my shoulders. If I stay any longer, we will be molded into one. But what about my light my love? What about my life? 


Is this the way you will finally show me the glow? By making me live inside it? Your version of love is sick but I'm kinda growing to love it...


© 2017 DuffyDreamer



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well i know some people like this,talk all damn day and never say anything,i wonder if they are in touch with their real feelings,or if they are just trying to hide emotions

Posted 3 Months Ago


DuffyDreamer

3 Months Ago

Anytime ;)
 wordman

3 Months Ago

so hows that sand box coming along
DuffyDreamer

3 Months Ago

Still sandy
interesting, I liked it .

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was really good, a lot of emotion in it, from top to bottom.great job 😃

Posted 4 Months Ago


DuffyDreamer

4 Months Ago

Thanks Justin
Justin

4 Months Ago

Your welcome keep up the great work and I will continue to read!!
It's beautiful...
" Your version of love is sick but I'm kinda growing to love it..." such haunting words.
I love this.


Posted 4 Months Ago


DuffyDreamer

4 Months Ago

I do tend to fall into and adore haunting words.

Thank you RR.
I'm bad a interpreting poems. Are you describing all this persons imperfections and flaws and then learning to love them at the end? I'm also assuming this is a relationship considering that "we go back in forth in a fight" indicates a couple bickering? If so than what a wonderful poem. If not, enlighten me. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


DuffyDreamer

4 Months Ago

Oh Daniel, now why would I tell you the meaning when I could instead listen to people’s perspectiv.. read more
Daniel Valentine Rivera

4 Months Ago

Good point!Sorry I have a very direct way of consuming poetry. Regardless I think your writing styl.. read more
DuffyDreamer

4 Months Ago

Don’t apologize for how you think, it’s perfectky fine. And thank you Daniel

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