Lovely tears

Lovely tears

A Poem by Eden-Rose

I'm sorry I had to leave but I was going insane

I had to distance myself away from all the pain

It still hurts me to know that I left you behind

But I couldn't take this heart-rending feeling inside

I hope that someday you will forgive me but I know you'll be asking why

I just wish you to smile on and set our memories aside

I know it's a lot to ask even though it's been many years

But someday will you except the life I've made through these lovely tears

© 2017 Eden-Rose



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You seem to have travelled a dark path, my dear. Pain is a powerful force. Emotion is raw. Keep up the good work. I hope you can find a light at the end of the tunnel. Never give up hope. Keep writing; I enjoy reading your work. Your beautiful soul pours out in script. Broken and down, you are not defeated. Do what's best for you, you're on the path of healing. If someone hasn't told you today, I'm proud of you. Your strength is remarkable.

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gina

2 Months Ago

You are a very strong girl that I very so admire. You are the one I should be thanking.

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Lynaelee

2 Months Ago

Don't count yourself out, Gina. You both are talented writers that possess great strength. Ask yours.. read more
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2 Months Ago

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I'm trying to tell someone this very thing before I leave her

Posted 2 Months Ago


I'm around a person that shows
platitude of not caring it takes
longer to get out of a painful relationship
if you're not dating and you're
married but I feel trapped around
him so if they don't change and
you're broken hearted and shattered
inside thinking of what's best
for you if you need to heal specially
if it's a negative toxic relationship
and you're not it's platonic now
but we're not friends because
he doesn't pay attention.

But I thought this was
so lovely and heartfelt
with pain and a break up.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Benita Staebell McCartney- KindredPoet

2 Months Ago

😊 you're welcome
Powerful poem of emotions and sadness. I could feel it through the whole write. Well written! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
The sorrow of separation, yet knowing it was for the best. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Weird how we distance ourselves from other when we try to end the pain in us. A desperate run for a cure. A follies jog. As you drink the pain for substance.

I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading.
Wow this is so beautiful. Even more so how hard it hits home. I understand your pain and the darkness you face. I want to tell you that it does get better. The light will shine through the darkness. Don't give up the fight!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

Thank you truly for taking the time to spread some kindness!
A lovely write from heart and soul, and an endearing read...I love how your emotions were expressed, yet letting go or even saying goodbye, is never a good thing at that moment, but for the best, if you felt the relationship going nowhere. Nicely done. :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your heartfelt review and kind words.
T0TS

2 Months Ago

You are very welcome, Eden. :)
You're one of my favorites writers! And very strong indeed. This was a very emotional write and gut-wrenching! Keep it up :D
Thanks for sharing
Stay brave!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

Thank you truly!
Sonakshi Arora

2 Months Ago

My pleasure!
This is amazing! Wow, it got me on the verge if tears...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
This is what I am going through right now. So many thoughts running in my mind.
I hope one day we will be no longer be the way we were,
Those days are gone,
I have come over you,
I have moved on.
This is what my mind constantly is repeating. Thank you so much for sharing it at that precise moment. Nothing could comfort me more than this poem.


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eden-Rose

2 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you for the heartfelt review
Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

You're welcome☺

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