Touch Type

Touch Type

A Poem by Bad bunny

Touch Type

An old crystal lamp glowing

Diffuse baby blue light

Lies neath kerchief to damping

Profuse shimmer to write

Drifts seeth imply her stranding

Perched lofty her site

Midst haunt upon my billet

Below softly I scry

 

Crave to taste your lips,

Drinking my heart felt lines.

Rave to grace your sips,

Stirring your form in scribe.

Phrase I place your hips,

Caress embrace your thigh.

Quell the aches with bliss,

Filling hollow my side,

Rise to dwell my midst.

Letters follow my eyes,

Cries that spell this tryst.

Fingers adrift your spine,

Catch the warm air lifts.

Flutters cascade your fine,

Words glide your skin drifts…

Ascend joining to mine.

I gaze these grand gifts,

Writings adore our pines.

Sings praise to touch lips

Drop my stylus entwine

Sting defy writing your script

Slip to slumber and sigh


© 2019 Bad bunny


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I would never see this as "rough" rather than, it's haunting, emotional, creativity at most, where the passion for words joins the passion for love, and as I read down Your special words I feel as it it's love making to/with words and imagination as the same time a lovemaking with/to Your lover, the photo is perfect, VERY well done in both the image and the words dear Bunny*

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light

3 Weeks Ago

never be hard on Your self my friend, if it needed anything in Your opinion at the right time it wil.. read more
Bad bunny

3 Weeks Ago

too late i changed a few things :)
Light

3 Weeks Ago

hhaa that's OK... will read it again then :)



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The collage effect of the photo you placed with this added an extra dimension to the words, for me. I read this as a kind of love letter to the self- or second self that is found in the creative seat of consciousness. The journey of discovery that takes place when we open ourselves up to that side can be like first love at times, or -even better- right love. There's intensity and hunger in the reaching toward whatever it is we are wishing to fulfill and that can be just as palpable as a passionate romantic connection, I think.

I think, also, that online writing/sharing adds another dimension to this because it allows us to express ourselves kind of wholly and anonymously (if we choose) and allows a kind of freedom of expression that isn't always accessible in our day to day lives. For me, this read as a kind of love letter to ambiguity of all of that and how it can impact our vision of ourselves and of the world. I'm probably reading too much in, but I do have that tendency! Sorry if I've gone completely off the rails.

Anyway, I enjoyed this. I especially liked the creative word choices that had me checking the dictionary every now and then. Billet and scry, in particular, being new words to me. Nice work, here.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

You have a truly keen eye not a single thing you said is off the mark of my expression it is a conju.. read more
Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Thank you for seeing me
Such rhythm in your writing Bunny. Whenever I read you I hear music and it is often jazz. A most sensual write. Love it.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Thanks Chris I’m new to this kind of expression still getting my feet wet kind of a virgin to pass.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Week Ago

I am happy you are finding self love. What a difference that makes Bunny :))
This is dancing & sensual with growing intensity as I read along from top to bottom. I love the title & how it sets up this fulcrum where you balance the idea of words-as-seduction with one of in-the-flesh seduction. I got lost & forgot whether I was being seduced by your words or by realistic sensations suggested. This poem has much musicality . . . it could be a song (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Oh i am so happy you felt all of this... sensuousness in poetry is something i'm not to good at yet .. read more
LE Berry

12 Hours Ago

Picturing a dream lover in your fine visual choice of words Bad Bunny. Very nice.
Wow a sensational saucy poem indeed, your word choice is delectable poet, very poetic. Kudos.

Pls Pleez do comment/review my newest poem too.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

I am so sorry i missed you review!!! Bunny gets a bit con-fuddled at times:) Thank you for the kind .. read more
very lovely and sensual dear Bunny .... :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stella Armour

2 Weeks Ago

Same here Bunny, i don't try too hard, sometimes it just ends up that way lol :)
Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

well when you do it is all the more authentic :)
Hope your healing up Dear Stella
Stella Armour

2 Weeks Ago

Yes thanks dear Bunny , stronger every day ...
how very deftly done my friend and true.. Neville

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

thanks first friend:) glad you liked it
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

I thought it was very cleverly executed ... N
I really enjoyed the second part of this. I thought it was astounding. That's not to say I didn't like the first verse but the seond just hit all the right places. It flowed like treacle on a hot night.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ken Simm.

2 Weeks Ago

Ah, I see. Just read it again with that in mind and found my reactions changing. It is interesting t.. read more
Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

I would thoroughly enjoy watching you paint, it is a process most fascinating to me. I have in the p.. read more
Ken Simm.

2 Weeks Ago

I'll send you a couple. A detailed watercolour and a series acrylic on canvas if you like.
Seems like a song that speaks of adoration and lust and passion that is really appealing to the senses. Great work!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

thanks for reading me Marcus:)
OMG- you have surpassed the Song of Solomon in seduction, with the sweet, sinuous lines of your poem, Bad Bunny! Beautiful classical language, flow, cadence, rhyme- a latent lovely, lyrical bent for you, my friend- And I love it! Do you write of love of woman, or of the elusive act of writing itself- or both, hmm...”Quell the aches with bliss..Filling hollow my side”- I hear the Bard singing in your heart. Touch, type, tremendous write. Master Class work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

3 Weeks Ago

Oh dear, my face is read, I mean red (I can’t help it I have pale Irish skin) you are the most mo.. read more
I was here.......................................♥...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


J. J.  Nightingale

3 Weeks Ago

LOL.. Sorry, just wanted you to know I read your words... and didn't know what else to comment...
Bad bunny

3 Weeks Ago

I would have to say that was a lovely compliment:)
J. J.  Nightingale

2 Weeks Ago

LOL.....................♥.............................

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Added on May 2, 2019
Last Updated on May 3, 2019
Tags: hunger, love, adoration, completion, caress, scry, typing, crave

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Bad bunny

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