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A Poem by Relic
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A mass murderer/
terrorist 
is ravenous 
for your death.
Insatiable 
for blood
carnage and disfigurement.

Determined 
cunning
tenacious to liquidate
the largest crowds
through planning 
scheming 
patience
and careful intensification. 

Gun laws?
Assault weapons ban?

You might as well lay on a train track at night and hope it doesn't run you over.


© 2017 Relic



Author's Note

Relic
Due to lack of interest, I have no interest. :)

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powerfully said Relic ... power language in all the right places .. rhythm line smooth and without hiccup .. and i agree with your point completely .. the sarcasm may not suit some but i love it ... if we were able to enforce the laws we have we may be close to utopia .. the hitch in the rail is that there really are criminals...with bad intent ..and these days walking out the door is life threatening ... good read for me
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Relic

1 Week Ago

I agree, thanks Einstein.
Sad times we are witness to these days are as darkness unfolds to upon us . An excellent write.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Relic

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks very much Debileah.
Awesome imagery in this very dark and thought provoking piece. Glad you put it back on. Nice job

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Relic

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you. This isn't the one I took off. That was a story that was a bit too long for people I gues.. read more
Sean M. Addams

2 Weeks Ago

Unfortunately no one reviews like they use to on here
Relic

2 Weeks Ago

Oh yeah, you are so right.
Well said Relic ~ if a Madman wants to do harm NOTHING will stop them ... they will find a way!

I’ve heard so many people imply new laws will take care of the problem ~ but, they are living in a LA-LA land and in major denial. It seems we’ve just got alot of sick people running around these days.

Thanks for sharing your words on this unfortunate subject my friend ~ and I pray for a better World.

Blessings,
~ hsg

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Relic

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you.
heavenscentgirl1

2 Weeks Ago

The picture is very appropriate for the words that you have shared. Thanks for including it with y.. read more
Relic

2 Weeks Ago

.................... :)

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