My Smoldering Soul

My Smoldering Soul

A Poem by MsJewel





When the night whispers cool and the curtains sway

and a chill finds my pillow…

 

I curl up in your blanket of warmth

head on your chest

legs tangled

hands…easy…

as my heart skips a beat

 

And I am inspired in a blend of joy and hopeless surrender

 

Rising with every kiss

my smoldering soul

flickering with desire

as warm as the blush licking your neck

igniting your fantasies

 

Leading you to the place where passion trembles

and roses burn

and flames

find the cool whispers ruined

 

Fan the flames darling…

 

I feel like fire


© 2017 MsJewel



Author's Note

MsJewel
Poetry by MsJewel
Art by Karol Bak

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MsJewel,
Beautiful descriptions. Your words create visions and stir feelings. Anyone who reads this will wish to be physically in your poem. Once again a masterpiece from the master.
Blessings,
Richie b.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

thank you for your generous compliment :) Julie



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i can’t say want i want to say because it would be lavishly sexy. i love the way you ignite me Julie, just love that light!

regards,
al

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you Al :) Julie
Beautiful usage of imagery. You don't have to be in love to relate to this piece. Great work!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
A beautiful Valentine for lovers ... under cover... adoring overtures of feelings and
memories of hearts entwined. truly, Pat

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

Thanks so much Pat
What a perfectly sensual call to love's whispered flames. There is a tenderness and a haunting wildness as well, as night becomes laced in these burning stars. Beautiful!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
An owl on the moon

9 Months Ago

It was the perfect Valentine's Eve poem. :)
I've not been reading much lately and I was pleased to see this request from you. As always you didn't fail to impress me. Your descriptive style easily builds images of desire and slight eroticism. A beautiful piece.

Posted 9 Months Ago


MsJewel,
Beautiful descriptions. Your words create visions and stir feelings. Anyone who reads this will wish to be physically in your poem. Once again a masterpiece from the master.
Blessings,
Richie b.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

thank you for your generous compliment :) Julie
lovely sensuous thought building imagery thanks for sending it to me

Posted 10 Months Ago


The red chrome just adds a tint to the title.
Fiery hot emotions gives an essence to the piece.
Master's work indeed.



Posted 11 Months Ago


Incredible imagery. Really well written!
Well done xx

Posted 11 Months Ago


Oh, Julie! It's been so long since I read your gloriously romantic poetry. Elegantly sensual and filled with seduction. Steamy! You still have that magic touch, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 11 Months Ago



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