My wicked Bones~

My wicked Bones~

A Poem by Lily Mae
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"sometimes a feeling comes out of no where and tears you to pieces"

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Could you ever know the depths of sadness
my heart has felt in not having you?

Tears have been so over spent 
my eyes burn with the dry heat
of the pain left behind

I reach out with fingers of bone
my flesh removed by the feeding
done by the black crows

For one moment unleash your venom
just one more time
sear me with the poison of your love
and watch me fade away

I am nothing (you see)
I used to (see)

Just kill me one last time
with the blade intact and dull
for a more jagged impale

Blind me with double vision
as I fall dust to dust back
into the ground

Set me free with one more embrace

Could you imagine for just one moment
where the me in you 
the you in me... divide?

© 2013 Lily Mae



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Lily Mae

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A very haunting piece, Lily, that aches and yearns at the same time...a very endearing write from the soul because it is raw in emotions with passion and pain...I always enjoy drawing the artistic and emotional energy of a poem, and feeling what the artist felt when writing their words...like savoring a great dish that fulfilled the palette craving more sensational flavors.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lily Mae

5 Years Ago

Thank you EV.. it did come from a raw place.. I appreciate your reading me..x
€v De £'Am0r

5 Years Ago

Like that, raw like sushi. :)

You are very welcome, Lily.



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I love this one. It's dark and chilling, but rings a harsh truth. The emotional aspect is very touching and I get a real feel from it. I hope to get my poems like that. This was really beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


this is deeply touching...another confessional write that rips the pages in half...

and the reader feels the torment..."kill me one more time"

i am dead already...i need you yet you divide me from myself.

jacob

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lily Mae

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob.. xo
Always nice to read about Dark, intense love..just glad the feelings for this moment belong to another...Great write Lily although I never wish anyone the pain that those words inflict.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lily Mae

4 Years Ago

Me either...xo
Yes

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lily Mae

4 Years Ago

Well that makes me sad.. :/
Clayton Bardwell

4 Years Ago

I know.
Wow, this reached into my soul and ended up pulling my guts out...superb writing, I love a piece that makes me feel raw, or otherwise.

....and you promised you'd never use that pic of me in my bra! ;-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lily Mae

4 Years Ago

Well I couldn't use mine..the little lemons don't attract all the attention lmao.. ;) Your awesome .. read more
The level of depth you put in your poems amazes me. The font really goes btw! It just makes it look so much prettier! And this is exactly how I feel right now so I really like the way you expressed it. Sometimes we yearn it even though it hurts us. Sometimes it just takes everything out of you thinking how you can't have what you want-or who, in this case. And most of the time, you're fine, and you're normal and smarter than that but your feelings attack you from NOWHERE and no matter what mature advice you've been giving yourself, it just disappears and makes you stubborn like a little child saying screw it, you have to have it. Just once, even if it's unwise and not worth it. Just once.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lily Mae

5 Years Ago

Thank you Siren for the wonderful review... and your so right there are times when you have to risk .. read more
Brutal feelings inflicted. Intense write Lily. Excellent work as always..

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lily Mae

5 Years Ago

Thank you Judy..nice to see you on here :) I hope life is treating you great..xoxo
Dark Love...wrote about this once..fascinating subject..can this really be love or the carnal desire that makes us feed of such destructive feelings.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lily Mae

5 Years Ago

So true.. thank you ..and nice to see you back :) xo
you're welcome

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is amazing (:

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lily Mae

5 Years Ago

Thank you :) xo

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Added on July 11, 2012
Last Updated on March 21, 2013
Tags: Love, Pain, Loss, Release

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Lily Mae

The pinkie, MI



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