Darkness...

Darkness...

A Poem by SomeoneLost

Darkness is something I was afraid of

But now it's something I love

It was something I wanted to stay away from

But now it's something I want...


© 2017 SomeoneLost



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SomeoneLost
Small piece of writing

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This is exactly how I was and how I am now. It feels good to read something relatable. You made me happy by making me feel that I am not the only one. After I read this, my heart whispered 'that's how you were and how you are now'
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

3 Months Ago

I'm glad that you liked it and it's relatable to you :) Thanks a lot
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

It was my pleasure reading this. :)



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Gently powerful words!

One either walks into the dark or avoids it.. depends on senses, emotions.. We each know our own strengths and flaws (rather than weaknesses) .. our ability to accept or flee from.. perhaps. Your words are so brief yet meaningfu; they've made me waffle because they've rippled across my thoughts.

Posted 14 Hours Ago


Darkness - vegetables...same story! *snort* Seriously, this is compact, concise and complete.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

Hahaha. Thank you
Simple and gets the point across, also I completely relate.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

I'm glad that I could write something relatable :) thanks for reading
Wow, this is how i felt, it feels good for a moment, then u just want out!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

I'm glad that I could write something relatable to how you feel :) Thank you for reading
I always feared the dark because my imagination would run wild in it but now as you say so eloquently - it is wanted.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for sharing the excellent poetry SomeoneLost
SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

My pleasure :) I am very glad that you liked it
Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

My pleasure. :))
Beautifully written, very relatable.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

I am glad that you feel like you can relate to this :) Thank you
I do understand this poem. Silent and darkness. A safe friend now. Strong use of words led to logical end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

I'm glad that you liked it :) Thank you
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome.
Find something beautiful what I though is not beautiful at all. That happen to me all the time. Nice though in beautiful creation .

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

Thank you :)
Incredibly relatable. A part of me feels like I write better when I'm down and out. I've embraced the darkness, but I don't continually dwell there. It really does destroy my mind with saddening thoughts. If that makes sense

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

2 Months Ago

That's what I feel too. I feel like I write better when I'm down or feeling down. Plus writing durin.. read more
Four lines but still so good. I enjoy reading things i can relate to. Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SomeoneLost

3 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm really glad that you liked it

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