Death is Beautiful

Death is Beautiful

A Poem by Raas

Death is beautiful
When it's not chasing someone you love
But it's chasing you

Like you hate it
When someone you love is getting hurt
But you don't care when it's you

Like you hate the scars
In your loved one's heart
But you love the wounds on you

Following the same path

Death becomes beautiful
When it's not chasing someone you love
But it's chasing you

© 2017 Raas



Author's Note

Raas
Love is something that makes you think about everything differently. That's how it made me think.

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It's surely a case of loving someone more than loving oneself? Tis hard to survive feelings like that, means giving up more than you have to spare, maybe.. but.. there it is, that's what love means.. if it's real.

As to the language you've used, the emotions are finely written - they flow concisely but sincerely,
The last line is .. almost too much to take but if that's how you think, feel, then.. tis the right way for you to end..

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading



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It's surely a case of loving someone more than loving oneself? Tis hard to survive feelings like that, means giving up more than you have to spare, maybe.. but.. there it is, that's what love means.. if it's real.

As to the language you've used, the emotions are finely written - they flow concisely but sincerely,
The last line is .. almost too much to take but if that's how you think, feel, then.. tis the right way for you to end..

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading
This is beautiful and I love the rhyme scheme you used. I think it's definitely true how you don't really mind most of the time if it's you who's in pain, but to see that pain on someone else isn't as bearable. It's easy to see the beauty of death from your own experience, but it's hard to see it while looking at someone you love because I think the concept of death is different for everyone. God job!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much! :D
So simple yet so deep and touching. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

8 Months Ago

I'm really glad that you liked it :D thank you for reading
Suhd

7 Months Ago

Always a pleasure :D
I don't know. Death don't chase. He come and he take. I agree with your logic. We fear for the people we love than ourselves. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

8 Months Ago

By the word "chase", I meant time is running out. To me, it's already fixed when you're gonna die. A.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I enjoyed this one and you are welcome.
There are two aspects in such a case the first where the person who loves someone is facing one side love and that is why she feels such. Second is that when they part she wishes him to be happy and feel such.
When both are happy with each other, these thoughts come rarely because no one really wants to die. Thank you so much for sharing this as I could read such a lovely poem on which I could interpret so much. ☺


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

8 Months Ago

Yes true. But as much as I figured, in a relationship, both don't love each other the same way. One .. read more
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

I agree with you.
You are most welcome.
I can't begin to explain how well I identify. This isn't overly flowery or wordy, it gets right to the point and puts something out there that I think a lot of us get.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raas

8 Months Ago

I knew I was not alone. And I'm glad to know that I could write something relatable. When you find t.. read more

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Raas
Raas

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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