Screaming in the Darkness

Screaming in the Darkness

A Poem by Ashley

Screaming in the Darkness 

Sitting in the Dark 
screaming in silent rage 
numb with sorrow soon to be 
blinded by tears,
grieving with pain in my heart 
cause of the love that 
betrayed me 
left me behind in the dark 
all alone,
with no words just silence now
love has gone away 
from me to has forgotten me 
knowing nothing an no one is missing 
me.
an now screaming in the Darkness 
with rage an numb an pain within my 
heart, trying to escape...trying to break
free from this repeating torture 
but cant i can feel the Darkness separating
me from the living making me apart of the 
dark. 


© 2015 Ashley



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Well written. Strong emotions displayed here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This could use some commas but you wrote this very well. It is such a lonely place to be when you're stuck in the scary and lonely silence of the darkness.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Relic

1 Year Ago

I think I did too when I first started. You're welcome Ashley.
Ashley

1 Year Ago

:) yea i had my teachers try to help me with it when i was in school an my family tried but im sti.. read more
Relic

1 Year Ago

Its kind of like one little idea after another. I know its hard to explain. I guess you just have to.. read more
It is a repeating torture indeed. Some things are hard to take or move on. Excellent...:).................

Posted 1 Year Ago


Breakup with a boyfriend?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ashley

1 Year Ago

something like that yes every boyfriend i dated broken my heart but i like writing dark poems
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78Jon

1 Year Ago

Yea guys are dicks. About the only guy who stays with a woman are the guys who want kids. After they.. read more
lovely poem with shades of silence in the darkness, I had the feeling that there was lots more to be said, but I like the rage, and numb and pain

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is sad and beautiful all in one. Love it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dark and over dark .Feels of sad emotions . You write more than well. I feel inside your words like fly inside of spider web. I cannot fly away and I give up to resist.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Yeah..I definitely know how it feels to be left in the dark..all alone..
Nicely written! 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago



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