Fluid and Still Here

Fluid and Still Here

A Poem by Poppy Ruth Silver

There

are

more

typos

in

my

head

than

in

this

purge

of

fluid

thought



I am still in here

somewhere

opening doors









© 2013 Poppy Ruth Silver



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What an image this conjures. We open doors in our brains, don't we? Each one holds the words that will be in our next poem, but which shall we choose? Typos be damned, whatever door you open is always the right one and you know what? You are always between the lines. Great work. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

Great way to see it hon...each thought becomes a spiral, constant spin...thanks Lydi x



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So short but so deep...at times it's too hard for us to express our thoughts clearly enough for us to understand, not matter how overwhelming or amazing they ever are.

Posted 3 Years Ago


What an image this conjures. We open doors in our brains, don't we? Each one holds the words that will be in our next poem, but which shall we choose? Typos be damned, whatever door you open is always the right one and you know what? You are always between the lines. Great work. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

Great way to see it hon...each thought becomes a spiral, constant spin...thanks Lydi x
mike emil approves
typos
they are like broken eggs
makes you learn better next time
but don't drop my saki bottles
when you move in, poppy
there'll be heel to pay
HAI!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

Ah, never happen hon...not on my watch ;)
Behind every door is a new beginning. when one door close, another door goes open. Don't be afraid to open a new door, cause there's something beautiful behind every closed door.

Nicely penned

Love; Panda

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

Panda, thank you for your lovely thoughts x
Opening doors and thinking out loud ...
spiraling and winding
in life's fullness.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

Beautiful, thanks love x
Josie E. Cook M. A.

3 Years Ago

YOU ARE WELCOME!
We are all in "there somewhere opening doors" and what name do you call Me by Simon Peter? the master does not refer to him/herself by that name...only "others" use that title? laury

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

You always make me think hon x
This reminds me of something I had once read on the actual fact of Telepathy, it is never a clear sentence, just random typos.


Brilliant.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Years Ago

Oh, interesting! x
Arf, arf, I love the idea of the typos being in the head. Best not to worry about them. Meaning wot counts right?


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Years Ago

;) Never think on them or the writer wouldn't be writing...
more like metaphors. cool poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Years Ago

Thanks love, good to see you x

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Poppy Ruth Silver
Poppy Ruth Silver

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Merry Meet all, welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) My .. more..

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