Holy Exchange

Holy Exchange

A Poem by Vicki Ruth

Mind grieves
loss of ego
soul applauds

Dismemberment
severence
attonement

Mind grieves
soul whispers
look at the beauty

Loss of ego
is connection to all
sacred and holy

If I am misunderstood
and stand alone
then stand alone I shall

Release has found me
pain is no longer my own
I am home




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© 2014 Vicki Ruth



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The losses of ego allows the soul's inert beauty shine soul feel rejoiceful. When we let our spirit guide us we become better people. That sentiment seems to be a common teaching in many spiritual practices including mine but many times we fail to listen. Love this whole piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vicki Ruth

3 Years Ago

Thank you sweetheart, always lovely to see you xo



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pain is no longer my own I am home. If we all could achieve that, can you imagine. An anthemic little poem, Poppy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Fabulous piece, great message ,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful celebration of loss of ego.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Release has found me
pain is no longer my own
I am home.

Beautiful medicated write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


A good journey in your words.
"Loss of ego
is connection to all
sacred and holy"
Hard to find the place of peace. Ego is hard to lose. When we are part of life not the only one. We have learn true wisdom. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Such truthful words...God is always the most tangible when he answers our pleas.

Posted 3 Years Ago


the loss we all feel when we feel we lose our ego...well done...

Posted 3 Years Ago


The shedding of so much baggage felt like a rebirth.
This is spiritual work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


The last stanza says it all! Release is a wonderful feeling that we all like to feel and accomplish!

Posted 3 Years Ago


It's first LSD trip, that Buddha feeling you know...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vicki Ruth

3 Years Ago

Smiles, thank you honey xo

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