Gentle Grace

Gentle Grace

A Poem by PoppySilver

The sky appears bruised,
a rust like canvas that bleeds
a star's silenced dreams.

No saltarello 
graces this dark space, only
a funeral march.

Yet poetry guides
the soul home, a subtle warmth
that never betrays.





©2016 PoppySilver

© 2016 PoppySilver



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The wound is the place where the Light enters you.”
― Rumi

I see the eternal light that surrounds you and knowing it wasn't the light that was shining on you but the lantern you were always holding to light your way through darkness to get to the places you wanted to be. I see poetry you have inside, poetry is "vers donness" in Latin means ready made lines. Which French poet Paul Valery said once. Our minds are constantly emitting images, thoughts and entire lines. Each time we listen we capture these ready made lines . Keep a notebook with you at all times because if you don't you can lose that momentary thought and images and is gone forever in outer space. I see you are already walking the path to enlightenment and keep throwing yourself to your self cause your soul will always catch you every-time you fall or want to be hold. Sincerely your friend in poetry and life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoppySilver

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind thoughts Andrew, very much appreciated :)



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Good work this. There is a gentle melancholy to it, and yet a peacefulness that would come from gazing up at a midnight sky. Good write, Poppy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Poppy,
Gentle grace is a crowning beauty for me. So much beauty is found in the dark times. I love that you are alert to find it........................Blessings........................Kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago


I really enjoyed this poem Poppy :) Simple, yet impactful. That's one of my favorite ways to write poetry is short and simple, but yet as much of an impact as possible and that's exactly what you have done here. Way to go once again Poppy :) Can't wait to see what's next from you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Poetry is a haven for souls which seek comfort. Well done, I really like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Yes, it seems as if poetry and other forms of writing feeds the soul. . .in one way or another. . .well written. . .

Posted 2 Years Ago


A loving words to the graces of poetry and the therapy It all reveals

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like this, sad in a way but beliefs carry those in need.

Posted 2 Years Ago


As you know, I am in full agreement that poetry is a powerful and eloquent means of outing the pain. Great work here Poppy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoppySilver

2 Years Ago

Thank you M.L. :)
There's just something about the Haiku 5/7/5 form that's amazingly cool. You've inspired me to go off and scribble a few down. I liked all three of them and the way that they work together to come to a resolution. A very satisfying read.
z.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoppySilver

2 Years Ago

I appreciate your kind thoughts Zeitnot, thank you :)
one of the few instances in which gloominess is beautiful (stanzas mentioning the darkened skies)...lovely work

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoppySilver

2 Years Ago

Cascara, many thanks :)

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