If I Told You the Truth

If I Told You the Truth

A Poem by ReedWrite
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Reflections

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If I told you the truth,

            Would you twist every word,

Quantifying and qualifying,

 Until the meaning blurred?

 

If I told you the truth,

            Could you deign to understand?

Our paradigms sway and fall,
            When built on shifting sand.

 

                        It’s a convoluted maze,

                                    Where the heart runs to hide.

Walled ‘round with thorns,

                                           To protect your fragile pride.


    Bring on those pretty lies,

                                    Smile and nod your head.

                                        Believing in the fairy tales,

                                           That cavort through your head.

 

If I told you the truth,

           Would it set demons free,

To question the righteousness,

            Of mindless mob mentality?

 

If I told you the truth,

            Could it rout faux-facts?

Despite entrenched indoctrination,

            Shams invariably collapse.

 

                                It’s a convoluted maze,

                                    Where the soul runs to hide.

Walled ‘round with duplicity,

                                           To deceive and divide.


       Cling to the misguided rhetoric,

                                    Secure in your house of glass.

                                       The end justifies the means?

                                          So much self-righteous anger…so little class.


© 2017 ReedWrite



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ReedWrite
Just my thoughts...no expectations, qualifications, or justifications. :)

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The truth is such a convoluted maze indeed. Your truth, laying your soul bare, can only be heard if those it is told to put their precncieved thoughts to one side and hear and feel what you are saying. This is why we so very rarely show our true selves. Once bitten, etc etc.
Your words really came to life on the page and struck a chord with this old cynic :)

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ReedWrite

3 Months Ago

Hugs you....thank you Lorry. You always have such a unique way of seeing things. Appreciate your rev.. read more



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and i guess the truth is how we actually perceive it to be

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ReedWrite

3 Months Ago

lol...usually.
Thank you for the review.
 wordman

3 Months Ago

my pleasure
The truth is such a convoluted maze indeed. Your truth, laying your soul bare, can only be heard if those it is told to put their precncieved thoughts to one side and hear and feel what you are saying. This is why we so very rarely show our true selves. Once bitten, etc etc.
Your words really came to life on the page and struck a chord with this old cynic :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

3 Months Ago

Hugs you....thank you Lorry. You always have such a unique way of seeing things. Appreciate your rev.. read more
very good writing keep up the good work

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ReedWrite

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Genocide
genocide

4 Months Ago

hey do you really belive that I will find my writing partners stories again in my own writing I do m.. read more
It reminds me of Putin's Manifesto as he scribbles his words on the Tree of Life.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

8 Months Ago

We all scribble our words on the tree of life...in one way or another. :)
Politician- Liar. Economical with the truth.
Just tell the public what they want to hear.
Everything is rosy in the garden.
Though not necessarily that garden.
Vote at your own peril.

Posted 8 Months Ago


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ReedWrite

8 Months Ago

LOL...yup...pretty much. :)
I haven't read your pieces in so long and I apologize for that! I have truly missed reading your poems.
This poem is perfection! So many questions and deep thoughts spilled out. Amazing :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


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ReedWrite

8 Months Ago

Thank you Giulia...I am glad you enjoyed it!
well done says i...only the most self ignorant are unaware ..its the dividing that is enemy ...and all are guilty of attempting it ... i love your poem...the social commentary is classy and truth telling :) especially appreciate your two verse starting with:
" It’s a convoluted maze,"
there is meat in your poem .. timely... well said says i!
E.

Posted 8 Months Ago


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ReedWrite

8 Months Ago

Thank you, E...appreciate your kind words.
Big hug.
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Gee
Best speak your mind then deal with the repercussions, if any. True friends take it in their stride, the fair weather fuckers high tail it and try to muddy your name to all and sundry.
Me, just sit back and watch slightly amused as it all goes on around me.
Hope you are well


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ReedWrite

8 Months Ago

In today's world...one can no longer speak their mind, share an opinion, or stand up for their belie.. read more
I like it form it make poem more sharper. Truth can make things and human more cruel and brutal. All depending how we say and pass it on. I like your clear style .

Posted 8 Months Ago


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ReedWrite

8 Months Ago

Thank you...I appreciate the review
Wow. I love this poem. I don't usually write reviews without doing constructive criticism but I fail to see anything I'd change. The rhythm of the lines, the conceit, the arbitrary language, are great. But perhaps the thing that I most enjoyed was the presentation. It compliments all of those aforementioned things, guiding the reader along at a perfect pace and rhythm.

Sorry that I am so focused on form but this is just one of those times when I truly enjoyed watching an author dance with her pen.

Thanks for sharing Reed!

Posted 9 Months Ago


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ReedWrite

9 Months Ago

Thank you, HandsomeKenn...I appreciate that you took time to read and review...and I'm glad you enjo.. read more

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Tags: poetry, love, politics, hate, division, propaganda, lies

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