Sultry

Sultry

A Poem by Aaliyah Davison
"

I am a lonesome dove, searching for seeds.

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Powerless over you
Guilty of the actions
I've never ventured
Unpleasantly conversing with you

Inflamed at your lies
Or could they be misperceptions?
Provoked to love you
Thus incensed at your game

Hesitant with my heart
Perplexity arises beneath
I am a lost sheep
My qualms of you are at high tide

Could you be distrustful? 
Or maybe my vulnerability overcame
I am stupefied
Lo siento, mi amor

Pessimistic of my future
Dissatisfied by your trickery 
Abominable visions in my head
Yet why do I still love you?

My lousy expectations of you
I am despaired 
Miserable at your intangible feet
Mortified by my own judgement?

You are despicably romantic
My heart has yet to fall
For the billionth semester
Results come in, a sense of loss

Frustration overcomes me now
I want to thrive in your soul
Pathetic are my fantasies 
In tragedy's palm

Boiling with sadness
I am desolated by your love
Heartbroken I am
Concerned are you?

You wronged me,
MI amor
But I continue to love you
I always will

Victimized by your romance
I'm aching with lonesome 
Deprived of sleep and conduct
I will always invest time for you

Was I rejected?
More like dejected
What can alleviate my agony?
Your love, oh-so sweet

Withhold teardrops
No flooding of my face
Simply timid and still
I am a glass of pristine liquid 

Are your feelings indifferent?
Mine certainly are not
I feel reserved in spirit 
But in soul, I am weeping

Lifeless without you
Mourning transcendently 
Threatened by your love
Your complex system 

© 2016 Aaliyah Davison



Author's Note

Aaliyah Davison
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It is so heart touching piece. I really feel it in my heart. It shows that you have honest and true love for your, and your feelings and emotions seem like holy water in this poem. .... but it also shows that you have some confusions in you pure heart. and I realized some things very interesting in this piece. I want to say you that your beloved is not aware with your honest feelings and emotions, so you should try to express yourself and your honest emotions to him. Because it is more important that your beloved could feel your emotions in his heat. because it will be real life with happiness for him. It is also necessary that a true relationship should be free from complexities. so if you have any complexity, you should solve it talking together directly. I think maybe he is trying to know your feelings and emotion, but due to lack of a proper communication he is feeling alone. so keep your hand on his pure heart, so that he could relive.

Thank you so much, Aaliayah, for sharing this lovely and heart touching piece. Keep writing...
Szhzia

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Thank you sooo much, Szhzia. I really do appreciate your advice, I will talk to him more openly. I n.. read more
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

It is my pleasure... and you are welcome...



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It is so heart touching piece. I really feel it in my heart. It shows that you have honest and true love for your, and your feelings and emotions seem like holy water in this poem. .... but it also shows that you have some confusions in you pure heart. and I realized some things very interesting in this piece. I want to say you that your beloved is not aware with your honest feelings and emotions, so you should try to express yourself and your honest emotions to him. Because it is more important that your beloved could feel your emotions in his heat. because it will be real life with happiness for him. It is also necessary that a true relationship should be free from complexities. so if you have any complexity, you should solve it talking together directly. I think maybe he is trying to know your feelings and emotion, but due to lack of a proper communication he is feeling alone. so keep your hand on his pure heart, so that he could relive.

Thank you so much, Aaliayah, for sharing this lovely and heart touching piece. Keep writing...
Szhzia

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Thank you sooo much, Szhzia. I really do appreciate your advice, I will talk to him more openly. I n.. read more
SZHZIA

1 Year Ago

It is my pleasure... and you are welcome...
i read your other 3 poems but this one really grab hold of my attention because i could actually feel the every line,amazing hand you have.cant wait to read more from your book.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

I really appreciate your review and consideration of my poems, thank you so much.
This is very similar in theme to the Australian girl. This poem has been given enough space to adequately voice its desires and frustrations. It's good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aaliyah Davison

1 Year Ago

Thank you, @Kuro. They are, in fact, similar in theme.

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Added on April 29, 2016
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Tags: despair, anger, love, romance, heartbroken, lies, lonely