Three Small Poems

Three Small Poems

A Poem by Avinash

Putting them together


The Paint

Which paint

you use

to hide 

the dent

in your 


The Eyes

To meet a new friend

I crossed the lane

with an open morgue

yet years 

down the line

only thing I recall

are the eyes 

of the dead


In illusion

or reality

In dreams

or subconscious

Truth won't be found

But in between

© 2017 Avinash

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I like all 3 of these, but I think Om is my favorite. I'm always a sucker for poetry mentioning dreams.


Posted 8 Months Ago


8 Months Ago

Thanks Brittany
You bring forth a certain recognition of the chaos in life and the inner personal struggle to be truth, that has always been your mark and voice in your poetry, a strong voice too. I really like all three pieces woven together, gives a journey for the reader and one that entails some reflection and delving into shadows on their part. As always, my love, brilliant articulation ♥

Posted 11 Months Ago


8 Months Ago

Your Mercy :)
I enjoyed this as a collection of three "separate" pieces. I interpret it is our inability to hide, run, or cover-up our losses and weaknesses and see only the good. The last poem clarified that the only way to find truth is to seek our non-duality. Nice work!

Posted 11 Months Ago


11 Months Ago

Thanks for your kind review.
Diversity is hard to come by here with so much talent. But I think you pretty much nailed it with this offering! Your presentation and font are most impressive.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thanks Kelly for your kind words.
There are words, there are thoughts. When the two revel in personal mystery, then.. they become the ultimate for the writer.. an unsolvable equation for the reader.. an adventure for the seeker. Perhaps.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

Thanks Emma.
Nice has the depth and breath of a wise man.


Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

Hi Al,
Thanks for visiting.
How are you doing?
Alfred Kukitz

1 Year Ago

Not bad! Traveled south currently which is tiring.

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6 Reviews
Added on February 27, 2017
Last Updated on February 27, 2017
Tags: The Eyes, Om, Paint



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