It doesn't matter

It doesn't matter

A Poem by Avinash
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It doesn't matter Your spelling mistake Not even birthday cakes For the heavens sake All that counts are Words spoken from souls

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What all you did 
Just slid the lid 
To fool another one 
With words and expressions 
That was not your intention 
You claimed a home 
In a dome of presumed 
But that consumed 
All 
Your dreams and desires 
You could not even hire 
Fake gestures 
Before the curtain calls 
You moth ball 
The slickest of all 
Lived on 
When all dreams died 
Like the rest of the world

© 2017 Avinash



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As I read this, i could feel the emotionally charged nature of the words, but left wondering what had happened that brought all these emotions in the first place! It's a beautiful thing when a poem can leave the reader feeling so much while knowing so little. Good one :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

7 Months Ago

Definitely emotional turmoil. But like nature emotions come and go but some are captured in poems li.. read more



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I really like the style of your writing. and I really loved it. Thanks for sharing and Keep Writing!

Posted 5 Days Ago


You wrote this soooo beautifully.
It captured the attention and drowned me as a whole and I started to flow :)
Lovely Piece

Posted 7 Months Ago


Avinash

7 Months Ago

Thanks Pragati for your wonderful review.
Pragati Chaudhary

7 Months Ago

Always Avinash
:)
It sounds like someone came home but never recognized it was his home.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Months Ago


Avinash

7 Months Ago

Bingo Al. But you are always welcome here.
As I read this, i could feel the emotionally charged nature of the words, but left wondering what had happened that brought all these emotions in the first place! It's a beautiful thing when a poem can leave the reader feeling so much while knowing so little. Good one :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

7 Months Ago

Definitely emotional turmoil. But like nature emotions come and go but some are captured in poems li.. read more
Its an amazing poetry Avinash.. so real, so true, straight from the heart.. its the depressing reality of today's world and even ourselves.. i really liked it.. thanks for sharing..:) :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Avinash

8 Months Ago

Than you Naina
Gorgeous poetry
Slick rhymes and interesting story
loved it

Posted 10 Months Ago


Avinash

10 Months Ago

Thanks for your kind words.
A raw and brutal, succinct take on the sickest slick of them all... Mothballs and gall... Slid the lid over fake gestures... Very well penned...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Avinash

10 Months Ago

Thank you Silente for your kind words.
Silente

10 Months Ago

Of course, my pleasure
This was definitely a heart touching read ma cherie. great job

Posted 11 Months Ago


Avinash

10 Months Ago

Thanks Flower for your beautiful words
Well I liked your poem and words you have used for those deep meanings. Thank you for the read request Avinash.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Avinash

11 Months Ago

Thanks Anjali
Honest, true and powerful use of words and thoughts. The poem told the truth. It seem us and world forget the goals/dreams and slowly become empty. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Avinash

11 Months Ago

Thanks Coyote..my friend.
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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Avinash

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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