It doesn't matter

It doesn't matter

A Poem by Avinash
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It doesn't matter Your spelling mistake Not even birthday cakes For the heavens sake All that counts are Words spoken from souls

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What all you did 
Just slid the lid 
To fool another one 
With words and expressions 
That was not your intention 
You claimed a home 
In a dome of presumed 
But that consumed 
All 
Your dreams and desires 
You could not even hire 
Fake gestures 
Before the curtain calls 
You moth ball 
The slickest of all 
Lived on 
When all dreams died 
Like the rest of the world

© 2017 Avinash



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Its an amazing poetry Avinash.. so real, so true, straight from the heart.. its the depressing reality of today's world and even ourselves.. i really liked it.. thanks for sharing..:) :)

Posted 3 Days Ago


Avinash

3 Days Ago

Than you Naina
Gorgeous poetry
Slick rhymes and interesting story
loved it

Posted 2 Months Ago


Avinash

2 Months Ago

Thanks for your kind words.
A raw and brutal, succinct take on the sickest slick of them all... Mothballs and gall... Slid the lid over fake gestures... Very well penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

Thank you Silente for your kind words.
Silente

3 Months Ago

Of course, my pleasure
This was definitely a heart touching read ma cherie. great job

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

Thanks Flower for your beautiful words
Well I liked your poem and words you have used for those deep meanings. Thank you for the read request Avinash.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

Thanks Anjali
Honest, true and powerful use of words and thoughts. The poem told the truth. It seem us and world forget the goals/dreams and slowly become empty. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

Thanks Coyote..my friend.
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Yeah, I know this well as many creative souls do...as always you place the pinnacle on point with poignancy...the ending of this really speaks volumes...where does the cycle end? Perhaps not in our lifetime but then again once you understand human nature and that we possibly live in a matrix system it comes as no surprise...sadly ♥

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

You are right wise soul :)
Each time I read, I have a new intake. very catchy

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

Thanks for your kind words
A true message that speaks volumes about poets and writers. Words from the heart are more precious than all the fake pretensions and criticisms people heap on us. Keep it up , sir...:)..............

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

That's a Bingo Sami Bro.
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Wow. You are welcome. ...::::))))
How nicely you had written about those who do those say fake words & fulfill nothing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Avinash

3 Months Ago

Thanks Mary for your beautiful words.

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Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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