Why can't we?

Why can't we?

A Poem by Avinash
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Is it that difficult?

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A kitten crossed the street
towards a dog
both stray
one is another's prey
eternal enemies
in a moment 
cuddled, snuggled
and peaceful
accepting the soul
in each other
If they can
why can't we?


© 2017 Avinash



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Wonderful pic. No greed in the animal kingdom, they take what they need to survive. We take everything and more, and then some.
Good morning

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Because they lack the conscious ability to do evil... A great write, and an uplifting topic.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Good thought. Appreciated:)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


That is very innocent, i loved how you expressed your need to be with the one you love.
And you know, people tend to be more greedy than animals that's why we don't accept anything. we don''t cherish love and purity, we tend to be attracted to lust and lies. even when we don't admit it, our inside selves want that.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Avinash

3 Weeks Ago

Very true my friend.
This was the most precious piece you've written bro. It is sweet, innocent and shows us how we humans should be. We'd rather be jealous and bitter and vindictive to others....but we can love unconditionally if we really wanted to. If not, we can at least live in peace and let others live as well. Truly and simply beautiful.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Avinash

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Amba.
Thought provoking. It really hits the human nature saying that if animals can stay in peace why humans cannot?
Truly a wonderful thought and nicely written.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Avinash

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
Najam Us Saher

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome.
So thoughtful Avinash.
Animals teach us so much which we social animals too don't implement.
Wish if humans too could love easily.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Avinash

3 Weeks Ago

Very true Mary.
Because, sadly in human minds, the division is man made. Animals have a superior consciousness in my opinion and do not consider division unless it is survival...humanity has a lot to answer for. I love this poem, so moving and hopeful and the message echoes...beautiful photo too ♥

Posted 1 Month Ago


Avinash

3 Weeks Ago

You are right wise soul.
Awwwwww :*
That's soo cute and yes true
It's a slap to humanity and the people who discriminate against caste, color, sex and race!
Lovely Piece!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Avinash

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Pragati.

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Avinash
Avinash

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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