Uff My Dream

Uff My Dream

A Poem by Ayushi Beura

As usual you came near me, 
As usual you tug my heart string,
As usual it was just a dream.

© 2015 Ayushi Beura



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Precious lines...touched my heart
bahut sundar lekhicha.....
hasibani kintu mu bi emiti dream kari thili

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ayushi Beura

10 Months Ago

Thank you....mate tama review bahut bhala lagila
Just 3 sentences describing 300 feeling felt at that moment.....
Precious and real...
sometimes dreams feel real and other times reality turns a dream.....
so much pleasure to read this.....
keep writing.... So good to see such talents from my state.....
😃 Anindita😊

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ayushi Beura

11 Months Ago

Hehehe me too proud that you are of my state....Thank you
ahan... strong feelings toward love!

well, dreams are very ecstatic esp. when they are so "hooked up" with love ecstasy, perhaps when they get broken, it's even way hard to recollect the tormented leaf's broken-yet-unbroken life. very eye-catching imagery here. nicely penned. keep licking.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Ayushi Beura

12 Months Ago

Ohh thank you...its wonderful to feel that the length of your review is more than my poem :) ^^
Adams

12 Months Ago

should i stretch 'em a bit? *smiling*
Ayushi Beura

12 Months Ago

Hehehehe no thanks, so kind of you
An excellent brevity. So much said in few words. Effective ....:)))))

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Ohh thank you so much
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. ..:))))))
You proved that poem doesn't have to be long , if it expresses its feeling and emotions clearly that's enough nu . Heart touching .

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much...your words have touched my heart
wonderful and to the point, enjoyed

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
3 simple lines; brilliant! This describes the situation perfectly. Deep in emotion, yet clever in description. It deserves applause.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Ohhh thank you so much...
This is so sad! But the way it's written is so simple and elegent~ I like it but it really sad - i don't know why, but the way you explain it, is so good! I really like it, well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

I loved your review...thank you so much
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I like it because some of the most amazing things can happen because of a dream. The book Twilight started because of a dream. Lovely piece. N.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you soooooo much:)
This may be short and sweet, but that's what makes it so nice! I had a dream like this once, it made me feel sad once I woke up. I enjoyed reading this! Thank you for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

God willing your dream will be true soon...Thank you

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Added on September 11, 2015
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