Even though I miss you

Even though I miss you

A Poem by Ayushi Beura
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These are few lines from my novel where a girl dedicates this poem to a friend who is no more in this world.

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I feel you in the air,
I feel you in the sea,
The cool breeze makes me remember that you are always with me.

Even though I miss you I will not spell a word,
Remaining tears in my eyes will describe beyond yards.

Your music tug my heart string ,
I feel inside pain,
Even though I miss you its difficult for me to explain.



© 2016 Ayushi Beura



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So nice work once again...
because it's much relatable to me once again and I can understand the feelings written here.... just can't find words to review this work...
i feel sad reminding those feelings of mine.... so intangible yet so real....
fab!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you once again :-) :-) :-)
very heartfelt here, perhaps, smoothly written, as always.

so what ur novel's 'bout, btw? (mind me askin u a bit?)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Adams

1 Year Ago

umm... ummm... nice. is it available somewhere online across web?
Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

No not yet but soon it will be
Adams

1 Year Ago

lukin fwd to it. keep me update with ur work. xoxo
Good verse. The emotion is running throughout the poem. Excellent write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much:)))))
if we write it...we assign those feelings to be real...and it can hurt even worse...so often we leave them be and just wait for the feeling to recede.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Yes you are absolutely right but sometimes many people wants to recollect their memories by thinking.. read more
This poem brings a very deep pain to one's heart. It is simple but absolutely heart-rending. That's exactly what a sad poem should achieve. Mission accomplished. Thanks, Ayusha.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words
Short and beautiful, Enjoyed this write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Glad to read your review...thank u
Short and sweet simply put, a relatable emotional feeling

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much...
Powerful and emotional. I believe it is "Your music tugs my heart string"

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

I am so glad to read your review... thank you so much :)
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It is a beautiful poem. N.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much:)
wow sweetheart!!!!!your poem is really very very heart touching!!!!I feel like u have written this poem with ur true feelings......

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much ur review made me happy:)

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