I Feel So Loved

I Feel So Loved

A Poem by barleygirl
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(not so much!)

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Kissing my bunny all over her face;
paws wipe it away, as if to erase.

Scratching my kitty’s delicate neck;
likely to provoke a swift fang check.

Nuzzling pooch’s floppy ears divine,
her snort and growl an obvious decline.

Must all my friends reject my affections?
Fondling my furries, despite objections.

© 2016 barleygirl



Author's Note

barleygirl
They protest as I maul them, but if I stop . . . yeah, you know it!

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Awwww!!! Thats adorable!!! I can bet that your kitty and dog are quite beautiful....Your words about them in your poems says so much about the love you have for them and how much they love you back....Beautiful!! Amazing!! Adorable!! Speechless!!....I loved it dear BG.....Full ratings!!! (((HUGGING YOU AND YOUR PETS)))....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

I must say, I'm going thru one of the most precious stages of my life, when it comes to pets. Each o.. read more
Inject Positivity

1 Year Ago

Awww!!! You are welcome dear frnd....



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Oh this is one of the prettiest little things I've read all day. Such a cute reaction to light rejection! My dog isn't very fond of my little sister, I'm sure she can relate with you. Thank you for sharing. It made me smile. X

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review, which radiates your enjoyment, making me smile. My furries just want their l.. read more
Rhea

1 Year Ago

That is very true for many animals.Try lunchtime, they'll be all over you when you feed their hungry.. read more
barleygirl

1 Year Ago

You are so correct! At no time do my furries love me more than at lunchtime! *tee! hee!*
A very entertaining poem. Create nice place and visions. Thank you dear Poet for sharing your fun words to read.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by to read & review. I'm glad you found my poem fun . . . there's quite a bit of.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Too much seriousness. I did remind people. This is a writing site. Not a war-zone. You are welcome d.. read more
Aw, I wish someone would scratch my neck--Arf! Arf! Meowww. (Darnit, I can't make a bunny sound, heh-heh)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

You're one of my favorite furfaces *tee! hee!* Thanks for the playful review & for enjoying my love .. read more
pretty little poem :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

Perfect interpretation. Life can be so ugly, I like to keep it sweet & simple *smile*
Its nice to read a poem that's put together nicely. But here's my question--why don't you have a top writer's badge? You deserve one. Yes, you're very good and so is this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for your kind review. I've only been on this website for a couple of weeks. Not famil.. read more
Ah, those adorable little furballs are awful fussy, aren't they :)
Still, what's the odd nibble for all the pleasure they give, right?
Lovely, lighthearted and whimsical write, with just the right amount of "awwww" :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

A poem about my furry woes is always better than whining about how this ole carcass feels when I fir.. read more
loving pets is probably the hardest thing to do. hahah
they just don't always feel like giving it back and they don't pretend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

I often rant about how people always say pets love unconditionally! BOLOGNA! There are TONS of condi.. read more
Awwww!!! Thats adorable!!! I can bet that your kitty and dog are quite beautiful....Your words about them in your poems says so much about the love you have for them and how much they love you back....Beautiful!! Amazing!! Adorable!! Speechless!!....I loved it dear BG.....Full ratings!!! (((HUGGING YOU AND YOUR PETS)))....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

I must say, I'm going thru one of the most precious stages of my life, when it comes to pets. Each o.. read more
Inject Positivity

1 Year Ago

Awww!!! You are welcome dear frnd....
I enjoyed reading this haha. Sometimes we might act like we don't want something, but in truth, that's what we want the most. Your pets are really cute, and your affection for them is great. Beautifully written,. . . lke always:-).

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the million dollar review! (((HUGS)))
Jerryyoung1z

1 Year Ago

*hugs you back*

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barleygirl

Central Coast, CA



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