I Feel So Loved

I Feel So Loved

A Poem by barleygirl
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(not so much!)

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Kissing my bunny all over her face;
paws wipe it away, as if to erase.

Scratching my kitty’s delicate neck;
likely to provoke a swift fang check.

Nuzzling pooch’s floppy ears divine,
her snort and growl an obvious decline.

Must all my friends reject my affections?
Fondling my furries, despite objections.

© 2016 barleygirl



Author's Note

barleygirl
They protest as I maul them, but if I stop . . . yeah, you know it!

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"I Feel s Loved"
barleygirl,
Pets are precious. Pets are irritating. Maybe they have up and down days just like we do. I know that our spaniel, "Violet" just lives to be in my and husband's presence. When we hug each other she just makes the most racket,(you would be highly amused too.) Keep loving your babies. I know they love you dear Margie!
Blessings,
Kathy
PS. I have not had a bunny in a while. We had a carmel and white dutch dwarf which ended up just living in our back yard for the longest time and would get out and eat people's gardens and then come back home. We loved her. we had a grey and white tuxedo cat for about two years, our grandaughter's cat.


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Now I have 2 bunnies & 2 dogs. I had a cat, but she ran away & joined the feral community down by th.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

1 Month Ago

Boy, you are a animal lover, Miss Margie. Two bunnies, and two dogs.............hmm. I am trying to .. read more



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Aw! This was truly very sweet, Margie. Pets become more familial from all of the love shared. I found it very amusing because though the pets may swipe or paw they are also some of the best to snuggle when affection is what they seek. I have a pet cat, Maddie, who enjoys her own space. However, she's the most precious thing when I come home each day to fond hugs and cuddles. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very tender. Great read.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Love hearing about your cat Maddie, too! *smile* I tried a cat one time, but she ran away & joined t.. read more
"I Feel s Loved"
barleygirl,
Pets are precious. Pets are irritating. Maybe they have up and down days just like we do. I know that our spaniel, "Violet" just lives to be in my and husband's presence. When we hug each other she just makes the most racket,(you would be highly amused too.) Keep loving your babies. I know they love you dear Margie!
Blessings,
Kathy
PS. I have not had a bunny in a while. We had a carmel and white dutch dwarf which ended up just living in our back yard for the longest time and would get out and eat people's gardens and then come back home. We loved her. we had a grey and white tuxedo cat for about two years, our grandaughter's cat.


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Now I have 2 bunnies & 2 dogs. I had a cat, but she ran away & joined the feral community down by th.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

1 Month Ago

Boy, you are a animal lover, Miss Margie. Two bunnies, and two dogs.............hmm. I am trying to .. read more
Oh this is one of the prettiest little things I've read all day. Such a cute reaction to light rejection! My dog isn't very fond of my little sister, I'm sure she can relate with you. Thank you for sharing. It made me smile. X

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, which radiates your enjoyment, making me smile. My furries just want their l.. read more
Aehr

2 Years Ago

That is very true for many animals.Try lunchtime, they'll be all over you when you feed their hungry.. read more
barleygirl

2 Years Ago

You are so correct! At no time do my furries love me more than at lunchtime! *tee! hee!*
A very entertaining poem. Create nice place and visions. Thank you dear Poet for sharing your fun words to read.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by to read & review. I'm glad you found my poem fun . . . there's quite a bit of.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Too much seriousness. I did remind people. This is a writing site. Not a war-zone. You are welcome d.. read more
Aw, I wish someone would scratch my neck--Arf! Arf! Meowww. (Darnit, I can't make a bunny sound, heh-heh)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

You're one of my favorite furfaces *tee! hee!* Thanks for the playful review & for enjoying my love .. read more
pretty little poem :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

Perfect interpretation. Life can be so ugly, I like to keep it sweet & simple *smile*
Its nice to read a poem that's put together nicely. But here's my question--why don't you have a top writer's badge? You deserve one. Yes, you're very good and so is this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind review. I've only been on this website for a couple of weeks. Not famil.. read more
Ah, those adorable little furballs are awful fussy, aren't they :)
Still, what's the odd nibble for all the pleasure they give, right?
Lovely, lighthearted and whimsical write, with just the right amount of "awwww" :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

A poem about my furry woes is always better than whining about how this ole carcass feels when I fir.. read more
loving pets is probably the hardest thing to do. hahah
they just don't always feel like giving it back and they don't pretend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

I often rant about how people always say pets love unconditionally! BOLOGNA! There are TONS of condi.. read more
Awwww!!! Thats adorable!!! I can bet that your kitty and dog are quite beautiful....Your words about them in your poems says so much about the love you have for them and how much they love you back....Beautiful!! Amazing!! Adorable!! Speechless!!....I loved it dear BG.....Full ratings!!! (((HUGGING YOU AND YOUR PETS)))....

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Years Ago

I must say, I'm going thru one of the most precious stages of my life, when it comes to pets. Each o.. read more
Inject Positivity

2 Years Ago

Awww!!! You are welcome dear frnd....

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