Okay

Okay

A Poem by xoxo

Pale, your face is pale.

Thin, your body is thin.

Weak, your body is weak.

Broken, your soul is broken.

Okay, you are not okay. 


© 2017 xoxo



Author's Note

xoxo
A short piece because I wanted to write something since i haven't in a while.

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It's okay to be not okay.
Strong piece.
A lot in not many words.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thank you lots
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Vic
thank you for sharing. simple, and to the point.

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thanks so much
Pale face, thin and weak Body , Broken soul . its make it clear that S/he is not okay

Please tell us why S/he is not okay i am eager to know.

Nice way of writing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

this piece is about anorexia.
Short with a big meaning.
This was an interesting write, thank you for sharing :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thanks so much. :)
Joey Nizz

4 Months Ago

Your welcome :)
Direct sentences create honest thoughts. I wanted to know more. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thank you so much :)
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome.
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MCS
I enjoy your work short or long!

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

thanks so much !!
Hey, good job. You labeled this as a story, but you know it's in meter right?

Posted 4 Months Ago


xoxo

4 Months Ago

i had no idea
Thanks for sharing. I do have to admit this piece is beyond the depth of my understanding. It is going completely over my head. I am sorry I cannot give you a more constructive review.

Posted 4 Months Ago



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